Summer holiday

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The summer holidays are here! Time to relax and unwind. Let's head for the beach, build sandcastles, ride on donkeys and paddle in the sea. The golden sun is shining - No clouds are in sight. We apply coconut scented lotion then lay on beach towels taking care not to burn! We unpack our picnic hamper onto a huge tartan rug. There’s lots of delicious treats food gets eaten very quickly - we’re wary of pesky seagulls!

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Date: 5/8/2025 7:48:00 PM
I can't wait for summer, or rather time in the swimming pool, time at the park, etc. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Yes, I know it took forever to judge/comment on this contest and I am sorry.
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Date: 4/27/2025 10:10:00 AM
Watch for those pesky guys Jan. They'll empty your hamper for you! ;) Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/27/2025 9:07:00 AM
Seagulls are major pests in Newfoundland too! Congrats, Jan. A fun read. Take care.
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Date: 4/26/2025 4:04:00 PM
Sounds like fun. As a donkey afficionado, it enjoyed hearing that he got a day at the beach too. I enjoy the style of your poem.
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Date: 4/22/2025 10:00:00 AM
Jan, sounds familiar. Those pesky birds. At least it sounds like a good time. With the photos and words, it makes me think I'm there too. Take care and smiles!!
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Date: 4/21/2025 9:18:00 AM
Since my wife's death, I did not go anymore to enjoy the sea. Now I don't even have a car. Pity. There are beautiful if small beaches in Malta.
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Date: 4/21/2025 9:25:00 AM
We walk by the sea most days Victor but are not ones for the beach or sunbathing. Your Island is so beautiful ! hugs jan xx
Date: 4/21/2025 2:00:00 AM
ummm and where did the gulls come from, now that's humor!
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Date: 4/21/2025 3:52:00 AM
lol thanks Art. i suspect some would say they come from God lol
Date: 4/20/2025 2:06:00 PM
Those Gulls Have no grace , when foods involved.... do you really ride donkeys
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Date: 4/21/2025 3:52:00 AM
they are ruthless when it comes to food. i used to go on donkey rides as a kid lol
Date: 4/20/2025 1:21:00 PM
Have a very lovely season/s :-) hugs xx
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Date: 4/21/2025 3:51:00 AM
thanks Abdullah:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 4/20/2025 9:52:00 AM
Annoying little buggers, aren't they? The video says it's been blocked in my country...hmmm.
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Date: 4/21/2025 3:51:00 AM
how odd, its just Cliff Richard singing summer holiday. it was from a film in the 1960s i think
Date: 4/20/2025 9:49:00 AM
What a wonderful write you have here. Great Picture... They sure are pesky seagulls. Wish I was on your beach. Have A Very Happy and Blessed Easter Day...........
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Date: 4/21/2025 3:50:00 AM
there are signs here around food outlets saying do not feed the seagulls but the gulls cant read and swoop down - it can be very distressing
Date: 4/20/2025 9:10:00 AM
Can't wait for those long summer days Jan, always used to play that going on holiday with the kids. Hope you've had a lovely Easter. Weather been dry and warm too but it's clouding over now. Tom
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Date: 4/21/2025 3:49:00 AM
Sun is shining now Tom but was rainy earlier. son has arrived in London back from China think its been a tough time for him yesterday - at the airport for some reason they thought he has been on a ship from London to china - probably language barrier but they let him fly home lol. we pick him up about 6pm x
Date: 4/20/2025 8:39:00 AM
I'll take this lovely day at the beach just relaxing in the sun over the torrential rain we have now. Thanks for this bit of sunshine. Have a blessed Easter.
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Date: 4/20/2025 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Jerry, its been dry sunny but breezy here. Hope you had a lovely easter day xx
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