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Summer Holiday 07/05/2018 The natural way we came together, Waves break, shells and coral lay united. Tides rise pounding lust to regions nether, Together one, all senses delighted. Water warm elicits such temptation, Frolick free from restraint veiled in sweet sweat. Free all constraint, such sweet revelation, Flotsam floating rudderless, upturned, swept. Fun in the sun on holiday we chose, Reality bites, the tide starts to turn. Burning sun, bright days drawing to a close, A tsunami of emotion, heart burn. Summer done, longing for the sun I pine, Holiday done, I left my heart behind.

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Date: 6/2/2018 7:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeff. Well done.
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Date: 5/19/2018 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful sonnet. Well done!
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/21/2018 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Susan
Date: 5/18/2018 8:29:00 PM
A great closing couplet crowns your sensual sonnet, Jeff. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/21/2018 9:04:00 PM
Tx Susan so glad you enjoyed it
Date: 5/17/2018 9:02:00 PM
Well done Jeff, congrats on another fine win in my contest, your name is appearing a lot lately!
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/17/2018 9:34:00 PM
Thank you John. Very new to writing, I’ve never written before but I’ve really been enjoying the expression of my inner thoughts and emotions.
Date: 5/17/2018 7:37:00 PM
Beautiful love sonnet, Jeff. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/17/2018 9:34:00 PM
Many thanks Elaine

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