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Summer Haiku

Shadetree cools the ground
fluffy white clouds, hide harsh rays
Perfect summer day



Inspired by the photo for the
Haiku Contest by Raul Moreno

Copyright © Trudy Diane Rider | Year Posted 2009

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Brandee Augustus

August 3, 2009 at 2:16 PM

Congratulations on your win in this haiku contest!

July 27, 2009 at 1:48 PM

Beautifully done, Trudy. One of my favorites and congratulations on your win in Raul's contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 27, 2009 at 1:07 PM

Trudy, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

July 25, 2009 at 3:38 PM

Trudy, how are you??? Beautiful haiku! Warmest thanks for the congrats and right back to you. So thoughtful of you to stop by, and I so appreciate it. Hope life is good. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

James Marshall Goff

July 25, 2009 at 1:06 PM

remarkable peace portrayed in this winning haiku! congrats! Trudy!! jimbo

July 25, 2009 at 12:33 PM

This is lovely Trudy. Congraulations on you win. Thank you for you comments. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

July 25, 2009 at 6:46 AM

WEll done!! Congratulations Trudy!!!

July 25, 2009 at 2:54 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Trudy.Rgds Brian

July 25, 2009 at 2:07 AM

Trudy, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

July 9, 2009 at 8:42 AM

Yep!...makes me wanta throw a blanket, lie down and dream under that there tree. daver

Carrie Richards

July 8, 2009 at 5:36 PM

Serene and nicely done! Love this haiku!!

July 8, 2009 at 11:04 AM

Done in proper 5-7-5 form. Fine work - feep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

July 8, 2009 at 10:04 AM

Nice and relaxing. Thanks.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 8, 2009 at 9:26 AM

Trudy, good luck in the contest. You have done an excellent job with your Haiku. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

July 8, 2009 at 8:02 AM

You have written about that photo so well. This is a very haiku.

Barbara Gorelick

July 8, 2009 at 7:56 AM

Nicely done! Good luck in the contest. BG

July 8, 2009 at 7:15 AM

Good morning Trudy - Loved this haiku and I wish you the best of luck in the contest - God Bless, MJ

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