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Summer Gradually

Summer, and the sunglow hours are creeping, so slowly by
with red ruby treasures, waiting placidly, all day in the sky
But, twilight finally ends, with the perfume of black blooms
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Smith Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 11:23 AM
But the memory lives on through the dark times for those of us who are up before noon. Of course it helps if parents help their teenagers find a reason to get out of bed. Good poetry always worth a look. Take care David in NZ
Buehler Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:13 PM
Thank you so much for your positive response, David. :)
Gorelick Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 12:05 PM
So adept at vivid imagery and subtle nuances! Robert
Buehler Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Thank you very much, Robert. :)
DiMino Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Such a wonderful description of the changing season and the enfolding night~ I find the night comforting, resting, and an oasis for quiet, undisturbed writing (thought). Beautiful write my friend.
Buehler Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 12:54 PM
There is nothing quite like the nighttime for peace and quiet reflection. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)
Poet Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 9:29 AM
I received the sensation that the vision you presented was all around. We're getting closer to the season of shadows. Many blossoms are deepening in color.
Buehler Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 11:56 AM
I loved the idea of the colors intensifying as night descended. Thank you so much for your thoughts. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 1:11 AM
We are approaching the season of darkness. Even flowers become darker.
Buehler Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Night covers all. Thank you for your thoughts. :)
Eslinger Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Evelyn, effective photo with a very affecting pen. I felt surrounded by the scene you painted. Hope all is well with you. Long time no see, but I was off for a couple months. Hugs……sally
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:37 PM
It's so great to have you back, Sally. I am doing quite well, thank you. Thank you so much for the happy thoughts. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Mccann Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:04 PM
Cleverly done, Evelyn! And I like the black blooms. Elizabeth
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:21 PM
So thrilled with your kind comment, Elizabeth.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Evelyn, you paint a vivid picture that is quite lovely!
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:01 PM
It's wonderful to know you enjoyed it, Kim. Thank you.
Tor Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Lovely photo with lovely words to convey such visualization Evelyn well done Dear...
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 7:58 PM
Thank you for the delight of your appreciation, my friend.
Roper Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 5:53 PM
What a lovely picture. You've made it even more beautiful with your poem.
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 7:55 PM
Thank you so much for the joy of your comment, Eve.
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