Summer Gradually

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Summer, and the sunglow hours are creeping, so slowly by with red ruby treasures, waiting placidly, all day in the sky But, twilight finally ends, with the perfume of black blooms

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David Smith

Date: 10/21/2022 11:23:00 AM

But the memory lives on through the dark times for those of us who are up before noon. Of course it helps if parents help their teenagers find a reason to get out of bed. Good poetry always worth a look. Take care David in NZ

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/21/2022 10:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for your positive response, David. :)

Robert Gorelick

Date: 10/14/2022 12:05:00 PM

So adept at vivid imagery and subtle nuances! Robert

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/14/2022 12:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Robert. :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/14/2022 6:05:00 AM

Such a wonderful description of the changing season and the enfolding night~ I find the night comforting, resting, and an oasis for quiet, undisturbed writing (thought). Beautiful write my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/14/2022 12:54:00 PM

There is nothing quite like the nighttime for peace and quiet reflection. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/13/2022 9:29:00 AM

I received the sensation that the vision you presented was all around. We're getting closer to the season of shadows. Many blossoms are deepening in color.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/13/2022 11:56:00 AM

I loved the idea of the colors intensifying as night descended. Thank you so much for your thoughts. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2022 1:11:00 AM

We are approaching the season of darkness. Even flowers become darker.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/13/2022 8:12:00 AM

Night covers all. Thank you for your thoughts. :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/12/2022 8:23:00 PM

Evelyn, effective photo with a very affecting pen. I felt surrounded by the scene you painted. Hope all is well with you. Long time no see, but I was off for a couple months. Hugs……sally

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/12/2022 8:37:00 PM

It's so great to have you back, Sally. I am doing quite well, thank you. Thank you so much for the happy thoughts. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn