Aditi Mishra Poet Limerick

Summer Dessert

Drowsy on a warm summer noon,
we taste mango ice cream in June
chewing jelly I sneeze
startled, your cup spills cheese
bathed in dessert, a live cartoon.


June 3, 2020

Summer laziness Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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V. Deepa June 19, 2020 at 3:20 PM Hello Aditi mam, I love sipping mango juice and "Ice creams" are my saviour during summer time.Enjoyed your clever delicious write.:-);-) My mouth started watering as I read.Thanks for the treat;-)Congratulations on your win.Keep writing.Much love.~Deepa:-) Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 1:56 AM I am so glad my words reminded you of mangoes and ice creams. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Deepa. Much love and blessings :)

Krish Radhakrishna June 19, 2020 at 8:06 AM Yes, Indian summer and Mangoes! Remember them well!! I make Mango icecream at home! Quite easy to do! Congrats on your win and thanks for the nostalgia! Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 1:55 AM Glad my words took you on a nostalgia trip Krish. Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation. God bless you :)

Mohan Chutani June 18, 2020 at 8:32 PM Aditi, mango icecream is everybody's favourite on a summer afternoon. Enjoyed your limerick with a clever twist in the end- bathed in dessert a live cartoon. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 1:54 AM Glad you like it Mohan. Thank you for your generous appreciation and for my placement in your Contest. Best wishes :)

Michelle Faulkner June 6, 2020 at 2:38 PM I have never had mango ice cream, but it sounds delish! Fun rhyme with sneeze/cheese, this is a sweet entry for the contest! Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 5:56 PM You should definitely try it once in summer. It is delicious and keep the cheese away when you have it. It doesn't taste good after that :D Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Michelle :)

Caren Krutsinger June 6, 2020 at 6:51 AM A delicate limerick; you do not see that every day, but I am glad that I saw it today. Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 10:12 AM So glad you loved it Caren. Your words always encourage my spirit. God bless you :)

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2020 at 4:52 PM cute and fun one! Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 10:11 AM Glad you enjoyed it Andrea :)

John Watt June 3, 2020 at 11:54 AM Such a fun rendering of a funny episode. Bathed in dessert paints quite a picture. I bet you had a good laugh! By the way, I do love mango ice cream, had some just last week. Many blessings, my friend ~ John Aditi Mishra June 4, 2020 at 2:41 AM Oh that's so sweet to know. My husband loves it too and he had a similar experience as the one mentioned above. We always have a good laugh at that memory. Thank you for your blessings dear friend :)