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Summer Dessert

Drowsy on a warm summer noon, we taste mango ice cream in June chewing jelly I sneeze startled, your cup spills cheese bathed in dessert, a live cartoon. June 3, 2020 Summer laziness Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 6/19/2020 3:20:00 PM
Hello Aditi mam, I love sipping mango juice and "Ice creams" are my saviour during summer time.Enjoyed your clever delicious write.:-);-) My mouth started watering as I read.Thanks for the treat;-)Congratulations on your win.Keep writing.Much love.~Deepa:-)
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Date: 6/20/2020 1:56:00 AM
I am so glad my words reminded you of mangoes and ice creams. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Deepa. Much love and blessings :)
Date: 6/19/2020 8:06:00 AM
Yes, Indian summer and Mangoes! Remember them well!! I make Mango icecream at home! Quite easy to do! Congrats on your win and thanks for the nostalgia!
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Date: 6/20/2020 1:55:00 AM
Glad my words took you on a nostalgia trip Krish. Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation. God bless you :)
Date: 6/18/2020 8:32:00 PM
Aditi, mango icecream is everybody's favourite on a summer afternoon. Enjoyed your limerick with a clever twist in the end- bathed in dessert a live cartoon. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan
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Date: 6/20/2020 1:54:00 AM
Glad you like it Mohan. Thank you for your generous appreciation and for my placement in your Contest. Best wishes :)
Date: 6/6/2020 2:38:00 PM
I have never had mango ice cream, but it sounds delish! Fun rhyme with sneeze/cheese, this is a sweet entry for the contest!
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Date: 6/6/2020 5:56:00 PM
You should definitely try it once in summer. It is delicious and keep the cheese away when you have it. It doesn't taste good after that :D Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Michelle :)
Date: 6/6/2020 6:51:00 AM
A delicate limerick; you do not see that every day, but I am glad that I saw it today.
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:12:00 AM
So glad you loved it Caren. Your words always encourage my spirit. God bless you :)
Date: 6/5/2020 4:52:00 PM
cute and fun one!
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:11:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Andrea :)
Date: 6/3/2020 11:54:00 AM
Such a fun rendering of a funny episode. Bathed in dessert paints quite a picture. I bet you had a good laugh! By the way, I do love mango ice cream, had some just last week. Many blessings, my friend ~ John
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Date: 6/4/2020 2:41:00 AM
Oh that's so sweet to know. My husband loves it too and he had a similar experience as the one mentioned above. We always have a good laugh at that memory. Thank you for your blessings dear friend :)