Summer Couplet

A Summer Couplet

The swimmin’ hole was very inviting,
Hope the fish are all nonbiting!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 7, 2013 at 10:53 AM
loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda
Martin Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Thank you Linda! Glad you liked it...Jim
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:28 PM
Enjoyed this couplet. Congratulations on your fabulous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Martin Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:41 PM
Thanks Connie!! Glad you liked it...Jim
Bauer Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 4:50 PM
ha! funny one! i enjoyed...congrats!
Martin Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:42 PM
Thank you Ilene!! Glad you liked it...Jim
Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Cute winning work..Got a chuckle..Congrats..Sara
Martin Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Thank you Sara!! Glad you liked it....Jim
Merryman Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:21 PM
This paints a vivid picture. Congrats on your win, Jim! Love, Kim
Martin Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Thanks Kin! Glad you liked it....Jim
Guzzi Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Martin Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Debbie!! Appreciate your copmments....Jim
Haick Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 1:05 AM
: ) Congratulations on a fine win, Dr. Jim!
Martin Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 6:02 AM
Thanks Annalise!! I appreciate your kind words...Jim
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 6:35 PM
Ahh, what great memories this one conjures up. Great win, Doc.... Jake
Martin Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Thanks John!! Glad you liked it....Jim
A  Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:04 PM
Dr Jim, a great way in chasing summer near the swimming hole.. I am sure the fish will not bite, for they are relaxing in shallow waters this time of year I imagine. . Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
Martin Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Thanks Skat!1 appreciate your comments...Jim
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Congrats!Enjoyed this funny couplet very much.
Martin Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Kash!! Glad you liked it...Jim
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:02 PM
This was so cute!! Loved it......but watch out for those hungry fish!!
Martin Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Carrie! Glad you liked it...Jim
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Yours was the funniest one for me. Good going!! Congrats on your second place in my contest.
Martin Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Thanks Andrea!! Glad you liked it. Had fun writing it!
Johnson Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 8:26 AM
Worth the risk. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Martin Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Joyce!! Apprecitae your comments....Jim
Roberts Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:14 AM
Lol loved it .....Seren
Martin Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Seren! I appreciate your comments....Jim
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