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Summer Cold

dim and dismal green disconnected from the sun waiting on the rain the leaves dull-humid still-standing, no breeze blowing expectant of drench a relief of burns the Summer cold to the touch an austere old thing the tinkling droplets chime whirligigs with fancy those cool snowy clouds puddles with bare feet the steam escapes the pavement white sandals in hand 7/23/2019

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Date: 7/25/2019 10:38:00 PM
Ah, that refreshing rain! Good one, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2019 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 7/24/2019 7:25:00 AM
Your imagery made my day today!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2019 7:26:00 AM
And so you’ve made mine :)
Date: 7/23/2019 11:49:00 AM
Phantasmagoria of imagery dearest, Kim! Impressive!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thank you sooooo much! Hugs, sweet friend!
Date: 7/23/2019 11:27:00 AM
Love your imagery Kim, Especially the last three lines. Good one Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2019 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota!

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