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Summer Carries You In Its Fades

encompassed in the last days of summer i eavesdrop on the ocean's whisper your voice carried in its sighs your caress in its waves as i undress seduction within its salty spray as i bathe in drops of your scent the horizon blushed in tones of me beneath this memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/19/2019 5:36:00 PM
Sandra, may I say "lovely"
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2019 6:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend...just a quick ray of inspiration today :) hugs
Date: 9/19/2019 3:36:00 PM
Such a superb piece Sandy, filled with lovely sensual tones making love seem round the corner. A great piece of penmanship! poetry hugs, Gordon
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Date: 9/19/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thank you...this scribble fell rather fast today...summer's end often sparks my muse :) glad you enjoyed it! Hugs
Date: 9/19/2019 12:27:00 PM
Oh my, let me catch my breath. Sandy, this was beautifully sensual and so soft and alluring. They way you wrote this, as if in a whisper, has the reader, me, falling helplessly into each stanza drenched in your mesmerizing words.
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Date: 9/19/2019 12:33:00 PM
wow thank you my friend...your comment made me smile, and giggle...i love summer and wish it would linger a bit longer...i guess all the ocean poems i read yesterday tempted my muse to come out of the darkness :) hugs
Date: 9/19/2019 12:27:00 PM
Whispers of romance.. such a tender and lovely tease..seduction at its best! A superb read, Sandy.
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Date: 9/19/2019 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...it's a bittersweet time of year...summer is fading out... :) hugs
Date: 9/19/2019 12:14:00 PM
Passionate work. Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2019 12:18:00 PM
Thank you my friend, not too often my muse does passion, but sometimes it flows from my pen... hope you are doing well my friend... hugs :)

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