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Summer Butterflies

blue winged canopy of a thousand butterflies can not compare to the fluttering of my heart when your eyes and mine are one deborah burch© 5/21/2012

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Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/16/2013 12:33:00 PM

For sure worthy of a first placement, Deborah. Congratulations on your fine win. By the by, I love your happy pic. :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 4/16/2013 1:58:00 AM

An awesome write deserved a win. Congrats on the top place.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2013 9:26:00 PM

Deb, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/15/2013 12:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win Deb...

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/15/2013 9:51:00 AM

Love the butterfly point of reference. Congratulations on the win.

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/15/2013 6:04:00 AM

I see why she loved this...ITS AWESOME!! You won a contest that EVERYBODY wanted to win! Great job, Deborah! Now its going to my fav list.

Hidden Sister

Date: 4/14/2013 6:23:00 PM

This is charming love at its best. J

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/14/2013 5:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your clever tanka. Love, Joyce

Len Gasun

Date: 4/14/2013 12:25:00 PM

An amazing poem with a very wonderful image! I love it so much and I've enjoyed reading it as well. Thanks for sharing and my big congratulations on your well-deserved grand win my dear friend Deborah. Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/14/2013 10:44:00 AM

Hi Debs many congratulations on your double win , first as a fave and now this xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 5:03:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/11/2012 8:47:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your win! Such a beautiful image!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2012 7:23:00 AM

congrats on your win Deb..

David Williams

Date: 6/11/2012 2:17:00 AM

Cap'n Deb, congrats on your win, whoo-hoo...David

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/10/2012 8:17:00 PM

Oh what a lucky man he was. Congratulations on your tanka win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2012 8:03:00 PM

YOu GO GIRL. You got on the winner circle just as you deserved. This one is so charming. Congrats!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/10/2012 6:30:00 PM

Dang, this is awesome, Debs....What an idea to combine all those gorgeous butterflies to create something incomparable to your love. Great job. :) Gwendolen

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 6/5/2012 12:39:00 AM

the depth of affection is beautifully revealed .unique ,thrilling, memorable and nice .thank you for sharing .jk

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/26/2012 8:01:00 PM

Oh I get it now! Cyndi is right. Your tanka is incredible, so romantic! I love both of your poems. You were definitely up for the challenge!

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/26/2012 8:08:00 PM

lol oh Rhonda, you are such a dear. Thank you.. love you...you are awsome!!!!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/25/2012 8:56:00 PM

Faaaaaaaaantastic. Loved this so much I want to know what you would do with moonlit pond. (Cyndi ducks as a book is tossed at her head) Well, you could give it a go, anyways. (Cyndi dives for the couch, crawls for cover). What's one more poem, huh? (Cyndi winks and blows as kiss) This will place high. Ignore me, I just loved this so much that I actually wondered, "Holy, man, what would she have done with the other choice? Inquiring minds need to know!" LOL. Hope your well, I'm about to hit hay.

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/26/2012 5:28:00 AM

LOL!!! ALRIGHTY THEN!! :) thank you so much for the encouragement and the fun and the challenge!! lol...i've been up all night keeping one eye peeled for that dang snake!! we ran into each other in the kitchen last night. dont know who scared who the most! LOL

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/26/2012 5:22:00 AM