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Summer Breeze

moonlight cascading
summer breeze soft-warm-wafting---
lovers stroll in pairs

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Elaine George

Date: 6/6/2010 7:10:00 AM

Bautiful picture you paint with this lovely Haiku, Audrey. Thank you for sharing. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 9:21:00 AM

Paints a very pretty picture, Audrey. Congrats for your HM. LUv, andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 2:51:00 PM

I see you got in the winning circle, and I can see WHY!! Luv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Audrey. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2010 8:05:00 AM

Congrats Audrey on your HM in the Strictly Haiku contest with these emotional words of luv and lovers... enjoy this special honor ..my BBF ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/18/2010 12:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome HM in my contest!!!!--------Charles

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/17/2010 12:05:00 PM

Loved your first line, Audrey! Sure sets the tone of your haiku perfectly--:) heehee I can't get over me being a mushroom, I think I'll appoint myself mushroom of the soup! haha

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/16/2010 3:15:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Audrey. Great imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your very nice comments on mine. Best wishes always, Caroline.

Billy Thekidster

Date: 5/16/2010 3:11:00 PM

Great write Audrey. Just wanted to let you know though that you didn't title the one that comes after this one. No One can see it. Best Wishes Always, YFF, theKidster, Billy

John Freeman

Date: 5/16/2010 1:54:00 PM

Awesome job on this one, Audrey, for the contest , no doubt. Awesome luck with it in the contest. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/16/2010 4:30:00 AM

Beautifully written and romantic, Audrey! And thank you for your kind comments..Keep on writing and have agreat Sunday...Gert

John Rhinem

Date: 5/15/2010 10:55:00 PM

"Moonlight cascading--Summer breeze soft, warm, wafting...." ~ Smile, yes, "Your Are A Talent I Believe!" ~ I thought I would stop by for another peek, just to see? And you know what else I found out dear lady--You seem to have a very lovely warmness about you--and that with your abilities make you very, "Bright!" ~ Once more, "Beautiful!" ~ "Love To You & Yours," John! ~ Goodnight:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2010 5:24:00 PM

A lovely portrait in words Audrey ..good luck in the new contest if this is your entry... thankxxx for the many wonderful comments and congrats on my poetry ..I have had eye surgery Friday and will need more on June 1st and 8th so am foggy and blurry right now but trying to do my best with commenting.. I did a new blog late last night explaining my current schedule for the rest of this month.. luv..BBF Linda-Marie..

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/15/2010 4:29:00 PM

Nicely written Haiku. Good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2010 4:23:00 PM

Great write with that little touch of lovers and romance...Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2010 3:29:00 PM

well done, and thanks for taking your time to send Jimmy a few of my poetry, enjoying the summer breeze,..p.d.

Mitch White

Date: 5/15/2010 2:52:00 PM

Yes, you have described my Cali weather to a tee Smiles as the Summer is finally here- has that paper got to Jim yet?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2010 2:41:00 PM

Ah, I can almost feel that summer breeze as I look back on those moonlight strolls, Audrey. Best wishes for success in Charles' contest! Love, Carolyn

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