Summer Breeze

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The slight breeze vanished. Heatwave is suffocating Summer survival

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Date: 7/11/2021 8:40:00 AM

We only have three seasons in my country: hot, hotter, and hottest. Stay cool Lassad.

Date: 7/10/2021 6:02:00 AM

Summers are hard. Well penned

Date: 7/10/2021 5:10:00 AM

Our temperature jumped this morning, I sat outside for five minutes and decided that was enough vitamin D.....liked your haiku Lasaad

Date: 7/10/2021 4:26:00 AM

Well said, Lasaad--A bit of relief from the heat.

Date: 7/10/2021 1:33:00 AM

I can feel the heat in your haiku Lasaad, no chance of it here at the moment, cold and rain in the UK.. Hope it cools down for you. Tom

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Date: 7/11/2021 2:55:00 PM

Thanks Tom????, appreciated your nice words, blessings and kindest wishes

Date: 7/9/2021 10:08:00 PM

I hope I'll survive this summer. It's already 77F early morning.

Date: 7/9/2021 9:25:00 PM

Ah, how true, Lasaad. This summer it seems the heat is particularly stifling and the slightest breeze is welcomed.

Date: 7/9/2021 8:25:00 PM

Vivid and familiar images are conjured by this eloquent and elegant haiku. Nice work, Lasaad. :)