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Summer Breeze

(To the melody of Simon and Garfunkel's "Sounds of Silence"): Summer breeze, I apprehend You've come to stir my heart again The way you toss her hair The way her green eyes flare The way you send -- the waves to the sandy shore Our hearts adore Summer breeze: You move me And when the day is done You frame the setting sun You set the stars in place You waft through outer space The way you send -- the waves to the sandy shore Our hearts adore Summer breeze: You move me And at the end of time When poems no more rhyme You'll soar your tenor high And ask your Maker why Why He took the Sun -- Moon and Stars from the heavens' sky Why'd they die And still the summer breeze, which moved me

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/7/2019 10:22:00 AM

dang! that's beautiful!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/7/2019 1:34:00 PM

Thank you, my friend. Thank you! :) gw

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/13/2018 4:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Gershon.Nicely done lyric.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/12/2018 2:19:00 PM

Swinging back to say "CONGRATULATIONS" on your win - well done my friend with this great gem! Hugs. Pandita

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/12/2018 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, my friend! I was a bit stunned that this one secured the #4 rank. But your labeling it a gem shows me that it may well read or sing better than I thought. Best wishes, gw

John Hamilton

Date: 8/12/2018 1:35:00 PM

Great write Gershon, I enjoyed very much, Simon and Garfunkel are one of my faves!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/12/2018 7:54:00 PM

I am so glad that this struck a chord with you, John! Thank you for letting me know. Best wishes, Gerhon

Gabrielle Jordan

Date: 8/11/2018 5:22:00 AM

Gershon, what you expressed was the exact feeling I had walking home from the metro last evening. Every once in a while a summer breeze hits you and for those moments all in the world is fine. Peaceful write! Nice!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/11/2018 10:50:00 PM

Wow! So nice to read your comment, Gabrielle, and so glad this modest effort worked for you. Blessings, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/8/2018 2:19:00 PM

Such a great idea to set it to "The Sound of Silence" one of my favorites, especially like 'when the day is done you frame the setting sun' much luck in the contest!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/8/2018 4:51:00 PM

Thank you, as always, Michelle. I hope it was a good idea; I'm actually not sure that it is, as the 'lyric' from clearly does not have to be set to a song ... At any rate, I appreciate your enthusiasm for doing so. It matches mine! Best wishes, Gershon

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/8/2018 11:13:00 AM

Gershon, this lovely summer breeze blew gently into my heart and mind with such grace, charm, and beauty! Good luck in the contest! Best regards always. Pandita

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/8/2018 1:06:00 PM

Pandita, thank you for your kind and gracious words. Much appreciated. As always, Gershon