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Summer Blues

Slivers of sunlight shine upon stacked bales of hay Summer is here, removing all traces of grey The sun roasts all those who dare to stand in his way Life's not all sunshine as summer blues blast away

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Date: 4/13/2024 9:41:00 AM
I hope your sunshine returns JO...
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Date: 4/12/2024 5:05:00 PM
a beautifully constructed poem, Joanna. I enjoyed the alliterative first line. I agree. Sometimes summer in its languid nature creates a sort of 'blue' feeling. Well said. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 4/12/2024 1:06:00 PM
A bite-size beauty. If for the contest, best for a win.
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