Summer Beach

seagulls weave blue sky lost in its briny cool breeze~ scan the navy sea a blaze summer sun shade neath scattered umbrellas ~ by lingering prints 6/23/2020 Summer Haiku's Poetry Contest . Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/20/2021 5:15:00 AM

Love where this takes me, Eve ~

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/30/2020 3:04:00 PM

Seagulls in blue sky lost in the breeze paints a favorite picture of mine. Congratulations on your win for this gorgeous haiku dear Eve! Blessings and love :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/29/2020 8:53:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/29/2020 3:07:00 PM

A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.

John Watt

Date: 6/29/2020 1:30:00 PM

Loved the 'briny cool breeze' line. Nice haiku, Eve. Made me want to go to the beach. Congratulations on your placement in the haiku contest ~ John

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/29/2020 9:33:00 AM

Your opening line had me...wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win.

V. Deepa

Date: 6/29/2020 6:21:00 AM

Wow very beautifully written :-) Seagulls weave blue sky~Loved this line very much mam. Congratulations in your win. Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love~Deepa

Patri Venkata Ramana

Date: 6/29/2020 3:59:00 AM

congrats on your win! pleasant warmth at your Summer Beach.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/29/2020 2:48:00 AM

Back with congratulations Eve. Tom

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/29/2020 2:03:00 AM

Back with Congratulations.... Great win Eve..

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/28/2020 7:48:00 PM

Fine win with your Haiku, Eve.

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/28/2020 5:56:00 PM

The loveliness of summer that comes to a height! I want to soar..Congratulations dear Eve!

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/28/2020 5:46:00 PM

Expressively well-done, Eve, describes a welcoming pleasant summery scene -- Aloha~@wk

Jan Allison

Date: 6/28/2020 5:38:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/28/2020 4:58:00 PM

"seagulls weave blue sky lost in its briny cool breeze~ scan the navy sea" What a striking imagery here! Love the second haiku as well! Congratulations, Eve:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/28/2020 4:43:00 PM

Great imagery Eve--seagulls weave blue sky! Congrats on your podium win.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/28/2020 3:49:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely and creative haiku!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/24/2020 3:24:00 PM

Vivid images which linger in the mind, Eve. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 6/23/2020 12:19:00 PM

Wonderful. Brings back memories of the beach when we were young. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/23/2020 11:59:00 AM

Lovely. One can at least enjoy the imagery if one cannot be there in person. Blessings.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/23/2020 9:35:00 AM

lovely imagery - am not fond of pesky seagulls though!:-) hugs jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/23/2020 6:25:00 AM

Wow cool lovely sunny bunches of haikus, all picturing it fabulously. Kudos. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest, a prose and do also read the articles and data I have copy pasted in comment section below the poem so you will confirm the matter further.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/23/2020 5:59:00 AM

summer beach in beautiful poetic haiku

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/23/2020 3:33:00 AM

Beautiful images Eve, good luck in the contest. Tom

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/23/2020 1:58:00 AM

wow.. wonderful imagery.. Great write Eve.. Good luck..