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Summer Impatience

SUMMER IMPATIENCE Now it is glorious summer And the winter of our discontent is turned Into a sudden sea of dandelions without number. This morning I walked out across the park Which I cross every day. Yesterday it was merely green and stark, Patiently awaiting its bi-weekly trim by noisy machine: The high-point in its half-monthly existence As a small part of the city’s spaces green. But today it was a riot of impatient weeds, Yelling with tiny voices yellow and bright, Rapidly bursting from their dormant seeds, As if God woke up this morning from His oblivion And, as an afterthought, commanded, “ Let there be dandelions.” . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . NOTE The first two lines of the poem are closely modeled on Shakespeare’s famous lines in the play RICHARD III . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck Entered in Debbie Guzzi's Contest Summer

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Date: 6/29/2012 1:21:00 PM
Sidney, belated congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/27/2012 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Summer contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:07:00 PM
This is the most inventive of them all. Focusing on the sudden growth of all those dandelions. I really enjoyed this one, Sydney. Congrats on your wim.
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Date: 6/26/2012 6:37:00 PM
Let there be dandelions.........a bouquet for a dandy summer poem....what would summer be without blowing dandelions into the wind?? Loved it!
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Date: 6/26/2012 6:28:00 PM
SIdney,,, congrats in DG, contest... I am so happy to see you on her wonderful list.. Always~PD
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:02:00 PM
ah a good beginning...now write ;) [beginning climax..end] ..[tickle] What is a weed and why..a rose by any other name would smell as sweet? Light & Love
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Date: 5/15/2011 12:24:00 PM
oh dandelions are wonderful, you can make jelly or soup from them...:) we all look forward to summer..it reminds me of a burning sun and heat, waters to cool, picnics with loved one in the grass...bare feet in grass or sand..
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