Summer

Summer World glimmers boldly Summer sets sails to full mast Eagles soar on high Haiku 06-15-2014 Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich Contest Name 1 in 4: Choose your Season, Choose Your Form

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Donna Jones

Date: 7/2/2014 8:33:00 AM

Wonderful scene! Congratulations

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/2/2014 9:50:00 AM

Thank you....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2014 4:22:00 PM

you soar with fine 'ku, robert...cheers to you on your great win.. hugggs

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/29/2014 9:04:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I prefer soaring to that of walking .

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:38:00 AM

Hi Robert, my friend, this is such a beautifully descriptive write about summer! Huge congratulations to you on your well-deserved win! Warmest regards.

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/29/2014 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Pandita!!

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/29/2014 10:27:00 AM

congrats on a great win, Robert my friend.. love the second line.. hugs.. Arlene

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/29/2014 11:51:00 AM

Thank you my friend!

Elaine George

Date: 6/29/2014 6:39:00 AM

What a beautiful picture you have painted with this summer haiku, Robert. Elaine

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/29/2014 6:57:00 AM

Thank you Elaine. Summer has always been my favorite season. Sunny days and smiles to ride so very far on!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 11:21:00 PM

Oh Robert, this one was SO cool. I loved how the last line complimented the rest of the poem. the second line is awesome personification of summer. I would have placed this higher except. . . you went and used that word SO and put it one syllable over the first line count!! Anyway, congrats in my contest.

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/29/2014 12:22:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Sorry, the syllable counter failed me then! For it showed all was right. My bad but very pleased you saw it as cool and placed it!

Elaine George

Date: 6/17/2014 8:05:00 AM

Great Haiku!! Good luck in the contest, Robert. Elain

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/17/2014 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Elaine..

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/16/2014 8:18:00 PM

Thank you my friend..

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 6/16/2014 12:22:00 PM

Ooh wee, can't wait! Very nice :)