Summer

ducks under the shade geese overcrowding the lake seagulls taking rest owl over the post night of cool breeze on the lake egrets sleep on trees

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2023 4:55:00 PM

Oh, Jay, I love all the birds that you emphasized in your haiku x2! Such a beautiful picture of birds in every phase of a summer day! Congratulations on your winning placement. Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2023 4:08:00 PM

Your set was very smooth and calm . Back with my congrats. Wish it had scored higher!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2023 6:55:00 PM

Great bird imagery, Jay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2023 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun "Summer" write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2023 10:00:00 AM

- Great written, Jay :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/12/2023 5:34:00 AM

Jay, congratulations on your winning placement, wonderful bird imagery!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/29/2023 3:32:00 AM

Very descriptive lines you have penned in this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 6/28/2023 8:55:00 PM

Birds seek shelter in the shade of trees during summer. Though summer days are hot, the nights usually will be cool with breeze. So nice to see all these birds together. Well done dear friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2023 1:24:00 PM

a lovely depiction of bird life on the lake!