Summer

ducks under the shade
geese overcrowding the lake
seagulls taking rest

owl over the post
night of cool breeze on the lake
egrets sleep on trees

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Date: 7/27/2023 4:55:00 PM
Oh, Jay, I love all the birds that you emphasized in your haiku x2! Such a beautiful picture of birds in every phase of a summer day! Congratulations on your winning placement. Blessings!
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Date: 7/14/2023 4:08:00 PM
Your set was very smooth and calm . Back with my congrats. Wish it had scored higher!
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Date: 7/12/2023 6:55:00 PM
Great bird imagery, Jay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/12/2023 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun "Summer" write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 7/12/2023 10:00:00 AM
- Great written, Jay :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/12/2023 5:34:00 AM
Jay, congratulations on your winning placement, wonderful bird imagery!
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Date: 6/29/2023 3:32:00 AM
Very descriptive lines you have penned in this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara
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Date: 6/28/2023 8:55:00 PM
Birds seek shelter in the shade of trees during summer. Though summer days are hot, the nights usually will be cool with breeze. So nice to see all these birds together. Well done dear friend.
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Date: 6/28/2023 1:24:00 PM
a lovely depiction of bird life on the lake!
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