Summer

sun, ripe citrus fruit sapphire sky flecked with white clouds~ tarmac road steaming

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Debra L Brown

Date: 4/8/2022 6:30:00 PM

Vasal, Outstanding Haiku, I love the colorful picture. Hugs ~ Debra

Anselmo Boles

Date: 4/5/2022 7:28:00 PM

A perfect description of vibrant colors and positive energy. This is a beauty Valsa!...ab

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/5/2022 6:24:00 PM

Love the feel of movement you've introduced in the last line, Valsa! ~ Fragrance and Flowers, Gershon

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/5/2022 5:52:00 AM

Enjoyed the summer's images, Valsa. The white clouds roam to bring relief.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/5/2022 3:02:00 AM

The gokd and glory, the fruit & frantic pace of summer. Shalom shalom

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/5/2022 1:26:00 AM

Love it, Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2022 1:19:00 AM

Great haiku. Great imagination. Well done

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/5/2022 12:07:00 AM

I can feel the warmth in your haiku Valsa. Tom