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Summer

sun, ripe citrus fruit
sapphire sky flecked with white clouds~
tarmac road steaming

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022

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December 13, 2025 at 4:02 AM

Good one. Your seasons for citrus must be different than ours. Our season for citrus over here is late fall and winter. My father used to say citrus is not good until after Thanksgiving. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara K

April 8, 2022 at 6:30 PM

Vasal, Outstanding Haiku, I love the colorful picture. Hugs ~ Debra

April 5, 2022 at 7:28 PM

A perfect description of vibrant colors and positive energy. This is a beauty Valsa!...ab

April 5, 2022 at 6:24 PM

Love the feel of movement you've introduced in the last line, Valsa! ~ Fragrance and Flowers, Gershon

April 5, 2022 at 5:52 AM

Enjoyed the summer's images, Valsa. The white clouds roam to bring relief.

April 5, 2022 at 3:02 AM

The gokd and glory, the fruit & frantic pace of summer. Shalom shalom

April 5, 2022 at 1:26 AM

Love it, Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar

April 5, 2022 at 1:19 AM

Great haiku. Great imagination. Well done

April 5, 2022 at 12:07 AM

I can feel the warmth in your haiku Valsa. Tom

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