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Summer - Heron

heron overhead 
    silhouette in twilight spread~
       wings hugging thick air
       


6/28/2021

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/6/2021 7:47:00 AM

this is so beautiful.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/5/2021 9:28:00 AM

Oh, I love this. Great one! Congratulations :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/25/2021 6:31:00 PM

Ah, a vivid beauty, Mo. I am enthralled by your soaring imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

James Horn

Date: 7/9/2021 4:26:00 PM

I was a member of the Blue Heron Order of Arrow Boy Scout Lodge in Norfolk, VA.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/8/2021 7:43:00 AM

(Belated) congratulations on your win, Mo, this is so grand~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/5/2021 9:12:00 AM

A beautiful picture of graceful flight in vivid images Mo! Congratulations on your win! We have Blue Herons in the marine preserve close to our home. Amazing birds! Blessings to you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Sam! I live near where two rivers meet, we have lots of Great Blue Herons, and this year more species than I have ever seen, along with bitterns and egrets. They IS amazing! ;), xomo!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/5/2021 6:14:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Beata! Have a lovely day! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/4/2021 6:40:00 PM

congrats on your top place, Maureen ~

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Line. I hope you are keeping well. Sending hugs your way ~xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2021 12:13:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer, Maureen :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:27:00 AM

Thank you Lovely! I love your new avatar :))) xomo!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/3/2021 8:00:00 PM

A vivid picture emerges from your haiku, Maureen! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:30:00 AM

Thank you Kim! Have a lovely day! xomo :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/3/2021 11:27:00 AM

A heron in flight - what a strong image to soar into a fine Haiku. Congratulations! Cheers, Brian

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:31:00 AM

Thank you Brian! The numbers and species are up in my neck of the woods, begging for a poem. Cheers! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/3/2021 11:17:00 AM

Herons have always been some of my favorite birds; your words capture a beautiful image Maureen. Thank you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:32:00 AM

They are magnificent! Thank you my friend! We must catch up. Been crazy here. xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2021 10:08:00 AM

wow, great imagery. Congrats on great win

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! Been seeing a lot more different heron species this year than ever before. They really do hug the air. Have a lovely day! xomo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/3/2021 9:53:00 AM

Beautitul. Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/6/2021 6:27:00 AM

Thank you Christuray! :) xomo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/3/2021 4:32:00 AM

Mo, congratulations on your first place win, gorgeous and vivid imagery!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/3/2021 6:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Tania, for enjoying it, and inspiring my muse. I have been seeing a lot more different herons this summer, egrets and bitterns, they needed a poem! Have a lovely day! xomo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/30/2021 5:36:00 AM

Hope he got a tasty lunch. Hugs always. xxoo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/30/2021 5:51:00 AM

LOL! He did get half of Prince Charming’s tail feathers. Mo hugs! ~x

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/28/2021 1:27:00 PM

So evocative, I can see its shadow, beautiful!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/29/2021 4:02:00 AM

Thank you Michelle! Our modern day pterodactyls. Have a lovely day! Warm hugs, xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 6/28/2021 1:26:00 PM

Mo, I think I was fishing with that guy yesterday.....great imagery...I'll recite it to the Heron when we fish again.....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/29/2021 4:04:00 AM

I, um, talk to birds too. I would be honoured! ;), I always say hello to crows and ravens, and I love yous to the swift’s. I hope you catch a big one. Thank you John! xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/28/2021 11:51:00 AM

Never thought of them hugging air, but an apt description! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/29/2021 4:00:00 AM

They do have big hugging wings don’t they :))) Been seeing a lot more this year, different types of herons too, not just the Great Blues, the river health appears to be improving. Aloha brah, stay well, xomo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/28/2021 11:40:00 AM

Hello Maureen, hi! I am happy to read this poem from you. I hope all is well with you. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/29/2021 11:01:00 AM

Hello Maureen, youare welcome my friend. enjoy your day my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/29/2021 4:05:00 AM

Thank you Darlene. I hope you are graced by a heron today. Have a lovely day, dear poetess. xomo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2021 11:38:00 AM

With the heat we are having, the air is so thick that the Heron might get stuck. I like how visual your short pieces are.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/29/2021 4:08:00 AM

Thank you Richard! I saw a crazy video of a bird that stopped flying, just stuck in the air… a glitch in the matrix perhaps? ;D, The air out west these days, it could just happen! Stay cool, xomo!