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Suicide Note

One day you will arrive. Night will enter in your pores, in your bones, like a baby trapped in a borewell, crying, striking, thumping. On each table, salt moaned for a classical taste. A pink moon was smothered in a virgin bed. Death walked in a sensual style. A black discharge continued from the areolae. Botox failed to uplift the sagging breasts. A thallium capsule broke on tongue. There was no suicide note. SATISH VERMA

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Date: 12/4/2008 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 8:48:00 PM
Satish - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/19/2008 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/5/2008 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. This is a very striking peace and the words are very descriptive. The theme is consistent with the title, and it flows throughout the poem quite well, especially with the twist in the end. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2008 11:23:00 AM
Very sad, stark write here! Congratulations to you Satish on your writing featured here at the Soup!!
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Date: 9/24/2008 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations Satish on this true to life poem "Suicide Note" being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 7:54:00 AM
I had a couple of friends in the pen who hung themselves I'll never forget the sight - congrats on being featured and God Bless
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Date: 9/22/2008 7:10:00 AM
Very dark and sad. Congratulations Satish on your well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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