Suicide By White Horses

Strong white riders saddled atop tempestuous verdant freckles,
roil like flecks of spittle across a horses hard ridden muzzle.
The charging equine manes of the waves thrash the tormented sea livid, 
towards the perfect storm

Vicious white caps wait for foolhardy prey to cross their path.
An obliging soul stands upon the quay, eyes anchored upon
the maelstrom.
Breath synchronised,
to the seething ebb and flow of earth's pulsing feud with its moon. 

A rush,
to join the dance of scourging testament to roughened waters
brings panicked breathing at the bottom of light-starved troughs. 
Where the crashing sounds of retribution meets the ears 
and a vengeful smothering of mouth stills the breath. 

A pointless struggle where none exists, and the triumphant sea
has its victim. 
The victim? A solution

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/4/2016 2:46:00 PM
Outstanding language as always... '...earth's pulsing feud with its moon,' '...vicious white caps wait for foolish prey to cross their path,' you always create a rich and colorful atmosphere with your magnificent imagery. Well done Terry! Best wishes, Keith (I am reminded of my poem 'Chrysaora Qinquecirrha' a metaphor for the dissolution of a relationship, the last words being, '...the bottom of the sea is out of bounds.')
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Terry Robinson
Date: 1/4/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Keith. I shall have a read and draw my conclusions. Take care
Date: 1/3/2016 11:26:00 AM
Vivid pictures fill my mind. Ty Terry
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