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Suicide

She smiled brightly through the day.  Then locked herself away.  In her room she spent her days  hoping for a better way  she finally ceased her stay on Earth.  Her final verse,   "why did everyone hate me?  All I wanted  was a friend."

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Date: 6/17/2017 3:10:00 AM
You've described that woman's death in a classy way. Nice poem, Keep up. Welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 5/26/2017 7:55:00 AM
Nice little " cry for help" write, reads ok ,however a small change ...remove " at home" from second line...now your implying she locked herself away in her mind and her home.... rather than just thinking she's sulking in her bedroom.....Ian
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