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Suicide

I run to my room, locking the door I cant handle this pain, I cant do it anymore I go to the cabinet for those pills I think to myself, if I take all of them, it will kill. Im taking the easy way out No one will miss me without a doubt Im all alone, I keep everything inside Everything would be better if I just died Thoughts are racing through my mind, Mom I have always loved you And dad I will always be your little girl And to my baby sister im sorry you have to go through this. I love you all but everything will be better off without me.

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Sierra Biersack

Date: 4/7/2011 10:30:00 AM

I can really relate to this poem. Keep up the good work Ashley -Sierra<3

Megan G

Date: 3/21/2011 6:29:00 PM

if i could relate to anything, it would be this. love love love it.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/9/2011 8:06:00 PM

Ashley, only two misspellings have to be corrected: In your third line, "cabinit" should be "cabinet" In your ninth line, "trough" should be "through". This is some more decently descriptive material. Suicide is never an easy way out. I'm sure you have too much to live for while you are still young.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/23/2010 5:29:00 PM

get over it. john h loving iii

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/16/2010 8:32:00 PM

You have posted a poem which shows the extreme gloominess and sadness of your mind. Your writing shows that you have great potentials but you have to give it a chance. Life may not be good right now for you, due to prevailing darkness all around, but please give a chance as your have the powers in your writing to convert this darkness into a bright sunshine. My good wishes and prayer that you come out from this darkness without eliminating life which is not yours but a gift of God. Ravindra