Suicide

I run to my room, locking the door
I cant handle this pain, I cant do it anymore
I go to the cabinet for those pills
I think to myself, if I take all of them, it will kill.
Im taking the easy way out
No one will miss me without a doubt
Im all alone, I keep everything inside
Everything would be better if I just died
Thoughts are racing through my mind,
Mom I have always loved you 
And dad I will always be your little girl
And to my baby sister im sorry you have to go through this.
I love you all but everything will be better off without me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Biersack Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 10:30 AM
I can really relate to this poem. Keep up the good work Ashley -Sierra<3
G Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 6:29 PM
if i could relate to anything, it would be this. love love love it.
Pettit Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Ashley, only two misspellings have to be corrected: In your third line, "cabinit" should be "cabinet" In your ninth line, "trough" should be "through". This is some more decently descriptive material. Suicide is never an easy way out. I'm sure you have too much to live for while you are still young.
Loving Iii Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:29 PM
get over it. john h loving iii
Kapoor Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:32 PM
You have posted a poem which shows the extreme gloominess and sadness of your mind. Your writing shows that you have great potentials but you have to give it a chance. Life may not be good right now for you, due to prevailing darkness all around, but please give a chance as your have the powers in your writing to convert this darkness into a bright sunshine. My good wishes and prayer that you come out from this darkness without eliminating life which is not yours but a gift of God. Ravindra
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