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Sugar Shack

My love, please take me back To your sweet sugar shack Sitting on the soft sand beach Paradise is within reach Rolling waves crest, so dreamy Briny air, wafting steamy Coconuts so full and ripe Swaying grass skirt, my delight Taut humid air, tan skin Dewy lips meet, it begins Swim southward along the coast To the sweet realm of my host Searching in the dark bamboo For the mythic pink Honu The enchantress of the sea My soft kisses set her free Forest of the straight smile The fair treasures of this isle Warm to my tropical steam Her smiling shell does gleam Inside her magic seas, you Swim deeper as I please you Within your endless ocean Drowning, fragrant emotion As the gentle cries go higher Holy water turns to fire Passion’s fruit upon your brow My Pele, it’s our Luau Your Tsunami drowns the flame My rogue wave crashes the same The relentless sea rolls back Joy resounding in the shack Honu=Green Sea Turtle Pele=Hawaiian Goddess of Fire/Lava 4/30/16 © Endorphin Junkie

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Date: 5/4/2016 10:23:00 PM
I have learned two new Hawaiian words! Congrats on this POTD!
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Endorphin Junkie
Date: 5/26/2016 10:51:00 PM
Thanks, Walter!
Date: 5/4/2016 12:20:00 PM
Congrats on the feature T
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:52:00 PM
:-) Thank you, Tim! Wasn't even aware until I checked it today...
Date: 5/4/2016 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive poem of the beach and your shack. My compliments!
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Endorphin Junkie
Date: 5/26/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph!
Date: 5/4/2016 6:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.d.t. - a great poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/4/2016 6:24:00 AM
Endorphin, A well deserving poem for POTD. Congratulations from my heart. Very reach thought & concept with a brilliant flow u penned here. Super 7 from me.....//:)hugs
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thanks, Manmath!
Date: 5/4/2016 4:57:00 AM
That's the way to go, Endorphin Junkie :.)
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Endorphin Junkie
Date: 5/26/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/3/2016 9:33:00 PM
Endorphin, Welcome back to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Skat!
Date: 5/3/2016 5:06:00 PM
Passion fruit and island delights. I found both with my island girl from Cebu Philippines. Superb poetry skills shown and a true pleasure to read. A7
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 5/3/2016 2:27:00 PM
Hey, EJ, welcome to Soup. I liked the Hawaiian references. I also enjoyed the unique word pairing of "fragrant emotion." Good use of synesthesia! Romantic piece. It may take a bit of time to get used to the how to move around. Keep clicking! The two most popular areas here are new poems and the blogs. Cheers, Cyndi
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Endorphin Junkie
Date: 5/3/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 5/3/2016 12:50:00 PM
Some great lines...I accidentally deleted my last comment...oops
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:55:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 5/3/2016 12:46:00 PM
Nice and sweet, Endorhin, Once again, a fresh new Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:55:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/3/2016 12:05:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Endorphin Junkie
Date: 5/3/2016 3:55:00 PM
Thank you!

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