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Sue's Popcorn- Re-Entered With Syllable Count

Holding popcorn as Sue watched the show, she could feel her date’s hand start to go down her blouse. With a shout, she cried, “Take your hand OUT. There’s no popcorn down there, don’t you know??” May 22, 2019 for Tania Kitchin's Bawdy Limerick Contest - Let's Keep It Pg-13 Poetry Contest 9 syllables A 9 syllables A 6 syllables B 6 syllables B 9 syllables A

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Date: 7/24/2019 7:40:00 AM
Ha ha, I still think it’s prudent to double check!
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Date: 6/12/2019 4:18:00 PM
still love this one Andrea, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2019 9:55:00 AM
Very funny! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/12/2019 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea! There's no butter down there!
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Date: 6/11/2019 7:20:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest, enjoyed!
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Date: 5/30/2019 10:26:00 PM
Hello Andrea … Ah! A fine limerick to have me chuckling. What was he looking for? Thanks Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 5/27/2019 5:42:00 PM
Made me laugh. Great limerick.
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Date: 5/27/2019 2:36:00 PM
Ha ha ha, great limerick
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Date: 5/24/2019 11:03:00 PM
Very good, and quite realistic; somewhere this is happening right now. Me, I have to seek it in my own bra - kidding. You amused me, I like that. Blessings ... CayCay
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Date: 5/24/2019 8:03:00 PM
Great job! I love it! As did my wife!
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Date: 5/23/2019 4:50:00 PM
Great Funny Bawdy poem, Andrea. It must have been top shelf popcorn!
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Date: 5/23/2019 1:28:00 PM
Pleasantly bawdy, for sure, Andrea. Made me chuckle.
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Date: 5/22/2019 8:42:00 PM
Haha...Nice limerick Andrea...GL in the Contest...
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Date: 5/22/2019 7:05:00 PM
lol. A fun read Andrea
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Date: 5/22/2019 6:08:00 PM
No need to get upset as popcorn spills everywhere and he was just making sure his date would not be embarrassed. Would you suggest he use his tongue instead of his fingers? Aloha! Rico (thanks for the laugh)
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Date: 5/22/2019 6:00:00 PM
:) Bet he kept looking for that popcorn! Funny limerick, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2019 4:53:00 PM
LOL
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Date: 5/22/2019 3:19:00 PM
ha! great limerick, andrea! best of luck the contest...
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Date: 5/22/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for the chuckle, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 5/22/2019 12:57:00 PM
:))) ... good one, Andrea :))) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2019 12:12:00 PM
lol Andrea love it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/22/2019 10:05:00 AM
Ha! Thank you for more than just a smile to start my day, and best wishes Andrea, Aloha wk
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Date: 5/22/2019 7:04:00 AM
Lol! Delightful PG humour! ;D Love it. Good luck! xomo
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Date: 5/22/2019 6:14:00 AM
Oh, my goodness, it's nice and fun) And, yeah, a sweet enjambement) Wishing Sue a win.
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Date: 5/22/2019 2:12:00 AM
Andrea, this is sooo perfect Panagiota
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