Suebeth

Abroad in dreams and well asleep
Wearing a dress of purple rain
Motionless under-covers keep...
And knowing this her killer came

The air around the moon was death
Her eyes opened in shock and ease
She never took another breath
Her dress with blood of his disease

The killer clever stripped her clean
To bury treasures...dress and gown
Without events of crime to scene
A murderer so walked the town

Years afterward and in the night
A woman whistled in the rain
From candles to no candle light
And often called me by my name

...Before I'm hanged I must confess
'Twas I who murdered my SueBeth
How could someone have found her dress?
She must have worn it after death!

Ghosts!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Roberts Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 1:04 PM
spooky little tale, congrats on your win in the contest
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Johny : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Johnny. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 9:43 PM
I remember liking this one a lot when I first saw it. Glad to see it made the list, Johnny. Way to GO!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Congrats Johnny on your amazing win in the Ghosts contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. enjoy your top ten victory..
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:13 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of carolyn, Johnny
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 4:24 PM
A great story and truly ghostly. Congratulations Johnny. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:31 PM
I really enjoyed this poem, Johnny. Great story told in verse. Congratulations on your win in the Ghosts contest! Jack and I judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:24 PM
This is great..wonderful imagination...congrats. BG
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 6:04 PM
wow, johnny. I am impressed. this is a GREAT ghost story!!!
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