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Sue Has Flu

In bed Stuffed head Plugged nose Can't doze On pot A lot Throws up Can't sup Back sore Pulse poor Does ail Quite pale Can't rest Tight chest Throat sore Ears roar Temp high Eyes dry Weak knees Feet freeze Has chills Takes pills Did not Take shot Now Sue Has flu

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/27/2019 11:12:00 PM

'Doc Bob;' Con job! ... Hey, this is HLAROUS, Doc! ~ Sue Flew

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/23/2019 5:56:00 PM

G'day Bob … thankfully I got a flu shot again. Its been a very bad strain down here this year, so there's a lot of Sues forced to be couch potatoes - thanks again Bob - Lindsay

Charles Messina

Date: 11/21/2019 6:29:00 AM

I love the way you did this Bob...hopefully Sue feels better soon. Great Write my friend. Charlie

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 11/21/2019 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. I appreciate your comments on this an other of my recent verse. Best to you and Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family - Bob

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/20/2019 7:17:00 PM

This is sadly exactly what the flu feels like! Well done!

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 11/21/2019 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Caren for taking time to comment. I've never had the flu but I've read and heard about some of the symptoms - hope you don't get afflicted!!! Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family - Bob

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/20/2019 1:03:00 PM

Hello Robert L. Hinshaw,poor Sue. Regardless getting the flu shot or not we can still get the flu. Have a nice day my friend.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 11/20/2019 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene for taking time to read my nonsense! Best to you - Bob