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I sit in solitude, with the moon as my light, its fickle glow obscured by calico clouds. The air feels heavy as silence adds its weight to the brumous glume. A bloated bullfrog croaks curses, failing to attract an empathic ear. And the blahs block the twinkling stars upon this desolate riverbank; as if they no longer existed! Oblivion is the prize I seek in my tug-of-war between dream and reality. I spy a ring of ripples in the inky waters, and suddenly, swans swim into the moonlight! Alabaster sculptures carved into the night; their innate beauty touches my heart. A smile uplifting my spirits reignites the candle of hope. They're such a delight! A vision strong enough to break the chains of depression; like sparks in the dark, where once I saw only darkness.

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Date: 4/20/2019 8:55:00 PM
Returning with happy congratulations for your excellent and well deserved win with this captivating beauty, Emile. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/21/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Susan, as always I appreciate your comments, have a happy Easter my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/18/2019 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Beautiful poem with great imagery, Emile. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/19/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Eve, as always I appreciate your comments, have a happy Easter my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/17/2019 4:02:00 PM
Their majestic beauty surely enchants Emile. Congratulations on having this lovely poem a top winner! xxoo
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Date: 4/17/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2019 8:02:00 PM
Your poem expresses deep emotions so beautifully, Emile. My imagination was caught up in your enthralling verses and I saw and felt every line, and I especially loved your dramatic and uplifting ending. Superb artistry, my friend. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2019 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Susan, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

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