Suddenly Swans

I sit in solitude, with a pale moon as my light, its fickle glow, obscured by calico clouds. The air feels wet and heavy as Dusk adds its weight to the hazy gloom. A bloated bullfrog croaks curses, failing to attract an empathic ear. And a ghostly mist masks the stars twinkling above this foggy, desolate riverbank: as if the cosmos no longer exists! Then I hear the faint rustle of feathers in the darkness where I spy a ring of ripples in the inky waters: suddenly, swans swim into the moonlight, and a smile lifts my spirits; they're such a delight! Like alabaster sculptures carved into the night, their surreal beauty touched my heart; in my tug-of-war between dream and reality. A vision, strong enough to break the chains of depression: I see light where once there was only darkness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Returning with happy congratulations for your excellent and well deserved win with this captivating beauty, Emile. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Susan, as always I appreciate your comments, have a happy Easter my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Beautiful poem with great imagery, Emile. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pinet Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thanks Eve, as always I appreciate your comments, have a happy Easter my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Their majestic beauty surely enchants Emile. Congratulations on having this lovely poem a top winner! xxoo
Pinet Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Thanks so much Connie, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 8:02 PM
Your poem expresses deep emotions so beautifully, Emile. My imagination was caught up in your enthralling verses and I saw and felt every line, and I especially loved your dramatic and uplifting ending. Superb artistry, my friend. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Susan, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
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