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Suddenly Lost

SUDDENLY LOST

Sunset serenades
disperse thoughts are her refrains
smiling yet she tears.

The autumn wind greets,
cool breeze brushed her pallor cheeks,
her head in the clouds.

Rumbles crash silence,
denial rush to her lips,
ghost eyes snap and slit.

The strawberry lies
made her wait for sunrises,
truth kissed bittersweet.

Innocence murdered
by colorful, luring masks,
times were trashed, wasted.
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*** Contest Name: LOST
Sponsor: Broken Wings

10:33pm, February 05, 2016

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/16/2016 3:18:00 PM I enjoyed reading all these, Olive. Loved that one about strawberry lies. So when is the big date?? Or has it already happened??? Wheeeeee Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 5/12/2016 12:00:00 PM Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much Login to Reply

Lenny Gazbowski Date: 4/9/2016 10:05:00 AM An excellent piece of writing Olive. Login to Reply

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/29/2016 11:20:00 AM Enjoyed it Olive. Love. Login to Reply

Samiha Zubair Date: 3/13/2016 5:25:00 PM Like intertwining of two chromatids in a chromosome, such beautiful two forces expressed in your poetry Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/12/2016 3:10:00 AM A beautiful offering Olive. ; ) Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 3/4/2016 1:44:00 AM Beautiful poem on lost. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 2/26/2016 5:33:00 PM Beautiful write Olive. Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 2/22/2016 1:29:00 AM Beautiful. Congratulations on your placement in the lost contest. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 2/14/2016 9:24:00 AM Beautifully penned Olive, nicely done! Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 2/7/2016 8:04:00 AM Beautiful senryu, Olive and well deserving of a placement in the Lost contest. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 2/7/2016 5:48:00 AM This is a very beautiful senryu my dear friend, Olive. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Kisses and Cheers! Thanks for sharing! Thanks as well for stopping by on my poem. SM please.. love lots, Galeo Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/7/2016 12:19:00 AM Olive, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest with this lovely and beautiful write ~ Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/6/2016 7:07:00 PM beautiful Senryu Olive congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2016 4:42:00 PM Olive, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM Congrats on your placement Olive :) *Smiles* -luloo Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/6/2016 10:48:00 AM 5 wonderful Senryu, love number 2..good luck in contest. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/5/2016 11:07:00 AM A creative take on this theme, Olive_eloi. Lies and deceit can only bring sadness and pain. I think that the mood you project here is what appeals to the sponsor. hugs // paul Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/5/2016 9:52:00 AM I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/5/2016 9:24:00 AM What a unique approach you took to the theme, sweetie. WEll done!! I am reading lots of great entries in this contest! Login to Reply

Kelli White Date: 2/5/2016 8:51:00 AM Love is beautifully tasted Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/15/2016 6:53:00 AM Thanks much Kelli.. =`)