Sudden Wind

sudden wind churns leaves flags sound like cotton sheets line pinned and shaken 4/13/2018

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/15/2018 4:03:00 AM

I like that image. 'Pinned and shaken', that leaves so much room for associations...Kai

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2018 6:24:00 AM

Thanks, Kai, and what I love is when someone takes my poem and lets their mind churn! I appreciate all your comments today, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2018 6:01:00 PM

great descriptive images!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 6:22:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/14/2018 1:38:00 PM

Nice imagery of the wind.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thanks, Juliet!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/14/2018 12:51:00 PM

Arturo's comment made me appreciate even more your fantastic Haiku, dearest , Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thanks, Demetrios! I appreciated it too! I like how we build off one another!

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/14/2018 7:57:00 AM

The old no dryer days...clothes on lines they hung, flapping in the wind and sun...invoking imagery of sound and movement...a certain melancholy too...All the best Kim...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2018 4:14:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo! :)