Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

Sudden Urge

A  SUDDEN  URGE 

I suddenly feel the urge 
To tell it all
You want to taunt me 
Go right ahead 
My own mind haunts me
Jump out of bed
The wicked one  said
Soon I will be dead
Fearing my life
Ending it all
Enable me knife
My name you do call

As dumb as they come
I frost all the air
You heat up the light 
A game, I strip and you stare
A game with no love
I do not play fair
I' LL still send you a kiss
For not wanting to care
I call it a  truce 
Just toss the coin in, my dear
The last fresh air I use
I know you will be there

A puppet you say, 
Abuse me you may
In time, it won't matter
I am yours any- way

Tormented, I' m not
Later  I' LL rot
Watching over me
Is that all you got?

A sinner by day, a sinner by night
Spilling the milk, spilling the beans
You have my attention, you know what I  mean.

by: The Lovely POET DESTROYER

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Paul Callus May 6, 2015 at 11:00 AM Slamming in free verse is right up your street, Linda! Kept my attention to attention:) hugs // paul

Cynthia Jones April 13, 2015 at 1:26 PM Linda, we all have our days my friend. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Robin Davis January 7, 2014 at 5:52 PM Linda What powerful and deep words. You were sure not liking someone with this write. LOL Thanks for the placement in your contest with my January poem.

Harry Horsman December 14, 2012 at 10:41 AM i'm nobody's fool she says....

Daver Austin October 18, 2012 at 5:04 PM Yes!! I had this sudden urge to regurge, not about your poem. It's just been that kind of day. You be bad. Love, daver

Joe Maverick October 18, 2012 at 4:02 PM Well done on the featuring of this one P D.."

Debra Falgout October 18, 2012 at 10:47 AM Well you got my attention too PD, loved your write here, have a good day, love debra

Terry Ledwell October 18, 2012 at 10:24 AM Brilliant tiger :-)

Vince Suzadail Jr. October 18, 2012 at 8:47 AM Congrats PD on the feature. From Billy Joel "I'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints."

Len Gasun October 18, 2012 at 7:07 AM My biggest congratulations on your featured poem by very dear friend, PD! love/hugs:)LG

Debbie Guzzi July 16, 2010 at 5:17 PM I KNOW you can write Slam...you can not change the form title and make the write be something other than what it is....I challenge you to write different forms ;) this is not narrative form it's slam (very good of course!) but I think you can be more than a one trick pony? ( Deb ducks the pie!)

Anthony Beesley July 13, 2010 at 11:10 AM i love it.it seems like you have a small suicidal streak.i like the way you play russian roulette with words.you use them like weapons of war. and like pat benatar said, "love is a battlefield" till death do us part as the world falls apart

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 6, 2010 at 6:17 AM oops sorry!! my comments sure are coming in installments here--just clarified that I meant "watch out for my contest entry for the about me contest (Amy Green's contest)---hahah sorry my mind's floating somewhere--probably chasing dinner--have to go in a few....

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 6, 2010 at 6:08 AM "watch up??"did I just say that? maybe I meant "watch up doc, HAHAHA wassup I meant)-- apparently I did--haha my brain must've been stuck on that roof--lol--no I really meant--"watch out"!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 6, 2010 at 6:04 AM haha yup I'm a big sissy, not being able to climb trees--I'm weird that way but I love climbing up a roof & picking mangoes from up there! more stable stuff to walk on I suppose ;) & hey no fair! I aid a had no life first haha I get dibs on it--kidding--now I must tell You--don't say that you have no life! I'm 29 & still don't know where I'm going, ugh...watch up for my about me contest entry ;)....still in the works though...

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 6, 2010 at 5:59 AM to borrow a line from you, now I feel the urge to put a note in my writes "not based on my life"--- & I take that back, I didn't mean boring--more like an impostor! oh my gosh--I think that sounds worse...hmm...

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 6, 2010 at 5:46 AM you sure got me hooked with this write all the way to the end (like in all your writes)! thanks for all your comments p.d.--have to tell you though--my sijo aren't based on my own experiences (my life's That boring!)--all from imagination right now...we don't even have Spring here--just a rainy & summer season--so n ospring, no climbing trees, no bee stings, no allergies, no hubby, no kids, but hopefully not no life ;) haha...this suddenly makes me look so boring...thanks again! --nikko :)

Jayne Eggins June 5, 2010 at 5:44 AM Loved this one brilliant work Poet ... thanks for the great comments on my poetry much appreciated love Jayne

Wilma Neels June 1, 2010 at 10:15 AM You have a way of capturing one's attention with your words.. Enjoyed this one too ~ WN

Alisha Dawson May 21, 2010 at 5:30 AM WHOA!!!! LOVE THIS POEM AND I LOVE YA STYLE. I GIVE YOU 5 STARS AND MORE!

Lynette Chachere May 16, 2010 at 5:57 PM also, i have to be in the right mood to slam, without even really knowing that im writing one.when i wrote blind as a bat.i was pissed.so you see, thats what comes out.lol but it won't be my last, i should think on it more.thanks(: -always

Jay Loveless May 11, 2010 at 9:03 AM this captured me. amazing work.

Billy Thekidster May 7, 2010 at 4:24 PM I had a sudden urge to return the bulk of chicken fescies you've been leaving on my pages. Here ya go> ,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=.............theKidster WASN'T here, MB-All Rights Reserved MMD

Michael J. Falotico May 5, 2010 at 3:02 PM Very Good!!! Love the way you express yourself... glad you liked my last poem Michael

Audrey Haick May 5, 2010 at 9:14 AM Deep, PD! Always interesting! Thanks for comments on my poem...appreciate your support...Peace, Audrey

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