Sucker

What are the soul suckers
 that forcibly cleave to you?
What do they mean to you?
Why do you let them steal from you?
How many more times 
will they make a meal of you?

Is it television,
or Harlequin Romance books?
Perhaps it’s gambling on your looks?
Maybe it’s wealth or obsessive health
that has attached its hooks?

Be suspect of anything, 
that prevents you from being who you are.
That obsession with driving the right car,
the adoration of beautiful people at the bar.
All those pretend pretty things won’t get you far.
Self pleasure, leads in the wrong direction,
away from the True North Star.

That empty feeling,
the loneliness quake,
all it does is take take take!
Can you feel it make your soul shake?
Do you wonder about the decisions you make?
You were born for far more,
soul suckers won’t relieve your heart ache.
They entice you with fake,
preventing you from realizing what’s at stake.
Open your eyes friend,
don’t be deceived by the snake.
He’s there to sap your power
and doesn’t want you to wake.
In the end all he offers
is a fiery lake!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 8:03 PM
Maybe that's where you get the phrase "worth your salt" ... ? Well ... you probably get that from working the salt mines actually. I think the Bible calls us "salt" because we bring out the flavor to life? As it says in another place, "He came to bring life and that more abundantly"... it's not just "food" ... but food with spice!
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Definitely a lot more distractions in today's world, too - and instant gratification without the effort to receive it. Good call out here, Rick. Makes one want to tear off their leeches (but it'll be painful in the process!).
Lamoureux Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Try a bit of salt, they will come right off without the ripping. It’s interesting that we are described as salt in the bible.
Manassian Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Wow, Richard. This surely is a wake up call for anyone who will listen! Very well written! The Lord is smiling. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Eileen. That is a nice thought. Hugs Rick.
Raven Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Hi Richard, another excellent write from your golden pen. I definitely heed the warning. A deep and powerful write that has to be a Fav. A wonderful job, Richard. Have a wonderful Saturday. your friend always....Mike.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Mike you too.
Roper Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 2:34 PM
great one , Richard.
Kinard Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 8:09 AM
Wow! your really shaking your fist at the world in this one. I get your warning. And I like how you did it in poetic form.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 9:53 AM
;0)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 6:50 AM
Ultra-cool message poem, Mister Reux! Your poetic straight right cross is jaw-dropping. Keep up the good fight, bruh. Love and more love always
Lamoureux Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Great to see you brother.
Dutta Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 12:26 AM
On your warning, I am cautious. Best wishes.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 8:27 AM
Thanks for your visit. ;0)
La France Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Richard, thanks for the "warning" great write _Constance
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Constance. Hugs Rick.
Yvonne Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Great write my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 8:30 AM
What a nice surprise visit Maurice.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 3:46 PM
There are definitely those who sap our energy with their negativity. Wise words to keep us aware! I can relate Richard. Have a great week. xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 8:30 AM
You too Connie. ;0)
Proxenos Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 11:16 AM
This a clever, powerful, awesome write Richard - yes Charlie is right, great words of wisdom, who cares if they think we are a bit old fashioned, or too quiet, or not into being too friendly with the whole neighborhood and getting involved in the gossip and certainly not interested in the best kind of car, as long as it is safe and looked after. A wonderful poem - a fav for me Rick, well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Jennifer, hopefully old fasioned will come back into vogue. Hugs Rick.
Messina Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Words of wisdom! Great poem with genuine meaning.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 9:43 AM
Thanks Charles.
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 7:05 AM
- A great warning, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Thanks Ann-Lise.
Nance Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 10:02 PM
strong and wise
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 8:04 AM
Hi Casarah. ;0)
Macfarlane Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Great write and advice Richard. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 8:08 AM
Thanks Cecilia. Hugs Rick.
Y. Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 9:35 AM
WoW! Richard, You’ve penned good lines that one could live by. Stellar advice and content. Excellent write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 11:04 AM
You as well Alexis.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Thanks all for the comments. I will be by shortly to visit each of you.
One Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 5:39 AM
I think this will mean different things to different people, we all have our energy vampires.. those that suck our blood and drain us, so to speak.... for me it is idiots, who have no common sense... i just roll my eyes and be silent as sometimes it is pointless even trying.. Great poem.
Agustin Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 1:16 AM
(i made a mistake in the first comment I posted... sorry) Thanks for this poetic admonition...greatly exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.
Agustin Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 1:14 AM
Thanks for this poetic admonition... greatly exemplifying what your poem requires. God bless you.
Connelly Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Wow what powerful words Richard. I especially love the line about the Northern Star for it always runs true. And isn't the real truth what one should be looking for? Thanks Richard.
Duet Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 8:50 PM
So true, Richard. Great poem with great advice. Check your soupmail. :D
Mcguire Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 7:37 PM
There are so many soul suckers out there. I fight mine too. Good job Richard!
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 1:55 PM
We have become slaves to how society wants us to be, and not how we want to be and as time marches on we get weaker. Interesting verse Richard. Tom
Lamoureux Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Thanks Tom. ;0)
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