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Such Was My Luck

Throughout my childhood, to about my fourth birthday, I was a happy, playful boy. Till Dad got back from war: from that day forth, I was his to punish: his knockdown toy. Pinocchio's wish was to cut his strings, and magically turn into a boy. But in my youth, I'd wish for magic wings: to fly far away in pursuit of joy. I'd stay out of sight, should Dad run amok: and if that didn't work, I would start running. But mostly, I got caught; such was my luck: authority abhors acts of cunning. And although my childhood was far from fun; I didn't go to war, but Dad did, and won.

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Date: 7/17/2020 10:05:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this to exemplify what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/18/2020 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Beata your support is always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/12/2020 3:26:00 PM
what a challenge for us Emile!:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/12/2020 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I love a challenge and look forward to reading some inspired works my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/12/2020 7:16:00 AM
Love it!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/12/2020 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Kim, your support is always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/11/2020 4:07:00 PM
Thanks, very Interesting challenge.Should it only be E or can it be some other vowel?
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/12/2020 8:42:00 AM
Hi Krish, It could be any letter, but for the sake of my contest only the letter "E" must not be used, thanks, Emile.
Date: 7/11/2020 2:53:00 PM
this is such an interesting challenge and a good example here, Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/12/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/10/2020 8:51:00 PM
This is a really good example, not easy writing without e's , but I will give it a try. Emile. Thanks
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/11/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Pixie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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