Such Souls As These

Christmas is over; everyone's partying, ushering in a new year, except for the unfortunate few who have no home. For them, there are no church bells of celebration; to ring in the New Year. They sleep atop steam vents to stay warm. I can't imagine being them; it's hard to fathom the nightmares that haunt their meager existence. Invisible in plain sight, the cold seeps into their bones and crushes their spirits. Homeless, they're the dregs of modern cities, and facing scorn, they preserve their dignity in alcohol, trying to numb reality. Hope is a luxury they can't afford. Winter is hell for the mentally ill living on the streets, for they've lost everything, even who they are as a person: demeaning and cruel; what was their crime? Humanity harbors such souls as these at its fringes. Yet, when I look into their eyes, I don't see a hopeless cause, I see the same dreams and fears I see in myself. And it makes me want to cry! Why are we indifferent to their hurt and humiliation? Is our lack of pity because we're immune to their pain, or is it because, like Cain, we are not our brother's keeper? Or perhaps, it's a little of both!
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Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Loved these lines "Invisible in plain sight", "the byproduct of modern cities", "they preserve their dignity in alcohol". Belated congrats on your fine win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Such an emotional, sadly beautiful and heartbreaking poem you've penned Emile. You give a powerful and poignant voice to the plight of the homeless. Your fourth stanza was especially moving and stirred my soul in a very mournful way. Your brilliant write sheds a bright light on this somber topic. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes ~Susan P.S. a great title as well..
Pinet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Thank you so much Susan, I truly appreciate this in depth review, you possess a kind soul and it manifest itself in your writings my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 4:03 AM
nothing sadder than being homeless on cold nights, great poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest my friend, Emile.
Hopper Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 1:17 PM
This is a really intriguing subject. Definitely one to ponder on. “Hope’s a luxury, they just can’t afford.” Brilliant!
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Thanks Anna, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
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