such reactions

may this day find you well
thank you


"such reactions"

who can excite my soul and revive my heart
bringing light and life
you

what can send me beyond comprehension
more than any physical touch
silent whispers and glances

when did desire appear
without seeing or hearing
it was a moment of chance

where did this love affair begin
within eyes that were open wide
under rainbows of sun and moon

why does passion grow
emotively intensely endlessly 
because love is real

how can I put us into words
a light that agelessly shines
such reactions lift us high

who better than us master romance
when feelings are greater than
how or why matter not

SkyWatcher
05-02-24
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goff Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 5:06 AM
You so well described molecular magnetism between 2 lovers leaving the reader sweetly dreaming of; Lisa, nice!
Ricci Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 4:23 AM
Good Morning James. Thank you very much. Truly. I do not take reviews or commentary for granted. Thus thank you for such generosity. May all know of love. Have a wonderful day. (smile)
George Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 4:06 PM
I love romance, more than I practice it. Hahaha. This is a great piece, Lisa.
Ricci Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 8:13 AM
Dear Tonye. Hello. I love romance too in every aspect and especially with poetry because it is the heartbeat of poetry. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. Thank you very much. (smile)
Proxenos Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 3:05 PM
Lisa dear friend this is truly a masterpiece. An embracing poignant write of great love, your magination as usual rises to great heights In this poem. I so love your last stanza. Hope you are well. I enjoy reading your poetry so very much. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Ricci Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Jennifer Jennifer Jennifer. Thank you thank you Thank you. Truly. I do not take you for granted. I will see you on your page. Have a wonderful day. (smile) And yes, blessings back to you...
Bowring Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Dear sweet Lisa, loved reading this romantic poem. You have beautifully captured and expressed so much here. Love,’ under rainbows of sun and moon’ ‘ a light that agelessly shines’ and the last stanza especially. Such a delightful, happy read that puts a glow in your heart. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Hope you are well dear one. Hugs and blessings xx
Ricci Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Dear Christina. Hello. It is I who thanks you. Truly. Thank you. Never do I take your generosity of your intakes reviews or commentary. I am honored. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. Blessings back to you. (smile)
Turner Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:04 PM
I'd say, "whoever (you) is in this poem, is a lucky man" Love begins in the heart. Love affairs begin when two hearts beat as one. Lovely poetry Lisa. Super love poem! I hope all is well with you and yours:)
Ricci Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Daniel Daniel Daniel. You are a gem. Thank you ever so much. I know I am late in responding so I hope this reaches you. Your commentary is beautiful in every way. May all know of love. I hope all is well. I will see you on your page. (smile) Thank you again.
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