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I ran out of breath on the road to Mumbai ...

    Not for sake of dust or smog or even health. I had rounded a curve on
    my motorcycle, and all at once could see in the same view, the skyline of
    Mumbai, Matheran Mountain, and a wide swath of the Arabian Sea, and all
    was lit with a late-day sun that was as red as the poppies in Patel Nagar,
    painting the whole scene with a bright sheen of exquisite hue! There was
    a slight misty fog from the sea through the valley around Matheran, that
    reached its fingers back towards Pune, and the glow of the sunset illumin-
    ated all of it perfectly, making the entire scene into a tapestry of scarlet
    lace threaded with gold! For a moment I thought I was dreaming and back
    at my hotel in Jaipur, for nothing REAL could be so exquisitely beautiful ...
    then I recalled your fiery red chili pepper lips and thought, "Yes - such a
    color is INDEED possible!" I caught my breath, and then moved on ...

I had a dizzy spell on the side of Sugarloaf Mountain ...

    It was early morning at the mountain on a very stormy day, snow falling
    as heavily as I'd ever seen, (even for the Western Maine mountains), and
    a bit of wind, too, but not enough to shut down the gondolas. There
    were not many people there that early on such a snowy day, so I had
    taken the ride to the top alone, and about three-quarters of the way up
    the mountain, the gondola came out of the clouds and above the storm,
    and the sunshine warmed my core. I was busy getting my skis on and
    poles in hand, (and the first part of the trail was north-ward), so it wasn't
    until I'd gone a ways thru the amazing powder of the Snow Fields that I
    noticed the panorama, and I had to stop to get my balance, for the sake
    of what met my eyes ...

    The peak of Sugarloaf and the surrounding mountains were sticking up
    through the flat cloud layer like islands on a gossamer sea, and the sky
    was so blue above that the clouds had taken on a dark azure, the low
    sun shining through the lens of atmosphere, adding a glow that was
    almost green, and it made for a sight that I'll never come close to de-
    scribing, at least in any way that gives it proper scope or a hint of justice.
    I stood there transfixed, thinking to myself that I must still be asleep
    in my Nana's house back in Kingfield, for nothing REAL could be so
    sublimely gorgeous ... then I remembered your extraordinary eyes and
    thought, "Yes ... yes - such colors ARE possible!" I steadied myself for
    a minute, and then kept on skiing ...

I had a revelation one day in the South Pacific ...

    A friend and I were scuba diving off the coast of Vanuatu, just north of
    Port Vila and about two miles out in Mele Bay. We were looking for a very
    rare "hairy" species of Nautilus called Allonautilus Scrobiculatus, that had
    been seen by a lone diver the previous day. We'd been down pretty deep
    all morning, floating in twilight and getting a bit frustrated chasing look-
    alikes, when we decided to head to the surface and the boat for some
    lunch. My buddy had surfaced right by the boat, but I was a bit farther
    out, and as I surfaced I was watching what looked like a Tiger Shark,
    swimming away from me in the opposite direction, making sure it had no
    interest in me, and I unknowingly backed into a school of large jellies.
    If you've never done so you can get confused very quickly as to what's
    up-or-down, but I'd risen enough to have strong mid-day sunlight
    directing me from above, so I stopped surfacing and just enjoyed the
    sight ...

    All the pinks and oranges and pastels of the jellies, set against the bright
    aqua back-ground of the water at around forty feet, and the bright sun
    rays piercing all with shafts of brighter blues and greens and white was
    exciting enough, but when I looked down toward the deep water, some
    of the jellies were glowing against the almost black-blue of the depths,
    and the mix of it all was more breathtaking than I can now put to phrase.
    I had to immediately adjust my regulator and try not to get too excited,
    but it was a once-in-a-lifetime sight, and I couldn't keep my heart from
    beating out of my chest! For a brief moment I thought I was still asleep
    and dreaming back in my bungalow in Matarisu, because nothing on
    Earth could be that stunning ... then I recalled your gloriously radiant
    smile and thought, "Yes ... such incredible beauty DOES exist!" I took
    a minute to gather my wits together, and then surfaced slowly for lunch ...

You see, I've had a thousand such moments ...

    Wonderfully exhilarating moments throughout life - brief periods of won-
    der and realization and heart-stopping beauty, and each time it happens
    I have to stop and think in consideration of YOU ... not because they
    remind me of you, and not because they compare to you, or even resemble
    you in any way, (although those things are often happening as well), but
    purely because that WITHOUT you, I wouldn't know what TRUE beauty
    IS, and every one of these extraordinary, exquisite sights and sublime
    moments, would have passed in an instant, forever unappreciated. The
    simple, undeniable truth is that, BECAUSE of you ...

Such beauty DOES exist.

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Date: 6/12/2021 8:15:00 PM
This could only be composed by a master poet! I'd bet my life on that declaration any day. Truly awe inspiring and a delight to read! Another great fav.. God bless..
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Date: 6/15/2020 7:41:00 AM
This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece!
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:40:00 AM
Oh dear Greg! This is an outstanding muse. A masterpiece and a fave for me. This invokes the explorer in me again! Such beautiful locations and emotions you paint with your words. Also, since I live in Mumbai now, I could easily breathe the words you have written about Matheran and Arabian Sea and the Western Express Highway till Pune. Much love :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:44:00 AM
Oh, that is so amazing, Aditi, that someone here who I admire actually lives there and can picture this in their mind ... it makes the poem come alive for me, and mean much more than it did! I'm so thankful for your kind comments, and that you find it worth your while ... blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3

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