Tim Ryerson Poet Free verse

Such a Small, Silly Little Thing

It was such a small, silly little thing- 
hardly worth mentioning...
but how could I spew such vile, hateful words?
Cheeks flushed red, eyes cast down
she turned clumsily and stumbled away...
fading in the mist

It was such a small, silly little thing- 
hardly worth mentioning...
but how could I spew such vile, hateful words?
Cheeks flushed red, eyes cast down
I turned clumsily and stumbled away...
fading in the mist

It was such a small, silly little thing-
hardly worth mentioning...
but how could I spew such vile, hateful words
fading in the mist...

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Brenda Meier-Hans November 13, 2014 at 3:44 PM Congratulations on your win Tim. Sometimes we tend to spew stupidity. The best scenario, we don't ever do it again.

Dr.Ram Mehta November 13, 2014 at 9:24 AM Congratulations on the win

Mark Trichet November 13, 2014 at 12:29 AM Powerful stuff Tim - enjoyed this mate, well done

Jan Allison November 12, 2014 at 4:13 PM my husband has a saying - engage brain before opening mouth - guess we all say things and then regret them - c'est la vie! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards February 2, 2013 at 9:24 AM This struck a cord.....how guilt can follow one throughout our lives. No small, silly thing......too often the small things are the giant things in retrospect. I like this poem a lot!

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2013 at 9:39 PM Tim, congratulations with your poem in frank's "Something to forget " contest. enjoyed the ending... always~ irmycorn..lol

Vicky Tsiluma January 31, 2013 at 4:02 AM Such is the potency of words Tim! 'forty years ago'- that got me. Note to self-be careful what you say - little doesn't seem little anymore. Nicely penned!

Harry Horsman January 25, 2013 at 3:24 PM missed this Tim,, i see congrats in order,, like this,, you drive the point home most profoundly...

Ralph Taylor January 22, 2013 at 7:22 PM Congrats on your win, Tim - Ralph

Debbie Guzzi January 22, 2013 at 1:56 PM Well you can go say NICE words and then remember that you said them too? HUGS Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Mohammad Yamin January 22, 2013 at 12:29 PM An amazing poem - a well deserved win. Thanks for your admiration of my Senryu Love, Tim. I am grateful. -Mohammad

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2013 at 9:33 PM I am sure we all have words we would like to take back. Great poem Congrats.

Seren Roberts January 21, 2013 at 7:59 PM Congrats. Tim ....Seren

Connie Marcum Wong January 21, 2013 at 7:45 PM This is so well written Tim, words can cut like a knife and once spoken, can't be retrieved, yet an l'm sorry goes a long way. Congrats on your win.

Debbie Duncan January 14, 2013 at 10:14 PM Sometimes you think "maybe I should of let it go ;} great write you got here. thank you 4 reading " Market Place" was watching Animie,,, Japanese cartoons and computer animation;}

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2013 at 2:44 PM I just love the way you did his contest theme. I hope I can come up with something, but i see I am running out of time!!! about my friendship poem, do you remember, it was meant to be talking of a girlfriend, though it was fictional nonetheless.

Kathryn Collins January 14, 2013 at 8:33 AM Dear Tim - It's hard to let go of our most reprehensible moments. Forty years is a long time to be haunted. love, Kathy

Poet Destroyer A January 13, 2013 at 7:34 PM Tim, how could you....i'm kidding... It must had been a tough fight,, to have spewed such vile words.. anyways, I will not ask what it was about... sad you had this person fade away xox~LINDA

Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 13, 2013 at 1:56 PM Enjoyed this Tim, whatever it was that you said, sounds like your sorry now, we all say things we regret later, love Elizabeth

David Williams January 12, 2013 at 10:40 AM Tim, wow love this and the format is great...David

Ravindra K Kapoor January 12, 2013 at 9:38 AM You have given a new color to your small, silly little thing in this wonderful write. It often happens Time, such small words penetrate deep and remain there for a very very long time and thank you once again Tim for your kind words on my new Poem. I hope the world would one day understand the reality one day. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

Ilene Bauer January 12, 2013 at 7:56 AM i love the way you've arranged this poem, and the ending was so unexpected. nice one!