Such a Sexy Voice

Mum asked me to make a call
I spoke to a man his name was Paul
Oh what a voice – I am in lust
Sounded as deep and rich as melted chocolate
With a lilt like Sean Connery – pwoooorrraaahhhhhhhh
But did I ask him - no I didn’t dare
Was he the man of my dreams and have greying hair

Jan Allison
5th July 2014
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Corbin Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Oh, Jan. I resemble that remark, lol, but alas I am no Sean Connery. I love the imagery, "..as deep and rich as melted chocolate." Very nice.
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:31 AM
I love deep sexy voices lol. Hugs jan xx
Nehls Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Better call him back and see what develops, my friend. See if that chocolate is covering a scoop of ice cream with a nice cherry on top. Sounds tasty, Jan.... Robert.
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 8:07 AM
LOl Robert just a chap in a call centre and I sadly have no need to ring back - unless I ring to say I'd written him a poem and that wouldn't be PC LOl. Hugs Jan xxx
Manassian Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:58 PM
My dearest Jan...I'm too taken with the grey...older men....I was always fascinated by them. Melted chocolate....YUMMY! Oh but hon...older men are MEN. They are riddled with foibles too, but a least they have the looks to compensate...and if the chocolate is in the voice? There is no way to resist. Paul, eh? ;) Hugs
Allison Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Am with you there Eileen - men they definitely improve with age and the greying hair mmmmmmmmmmm and there is no harm in dreaming! Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:42 PM
lol...I'm sure he did. You better call back...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 7:08 PM
Was a call centre Tim bet I never get to speak to the same person twice ... but I can dream:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxx
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