Such a Magical Place To Be

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I know the land where the lemon trees flower where buttercups swoon and sunflowers tower such a magical place to be, you see such a magical place to be. Where gumdrops in and pansies grin and the fruit is never sour where lilies guild with whip-poor-wills, to sing but never cower such a magical place to be, you see, such a magical place to be. Come run, let's see, just you and me, if moonbeams ever shower to the land where love is grand and the beautiful lemon trees flower such a magical place to be, you see such a magical place indeed.

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Date: 11/17/2018 3:08:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Your wonderful words always manage to touch the heart so gently. This is a poetic jewel my friend. These words have taken me into a dream of such vivid, wonderful images. I love the content of this one Charlie. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/10/2018 6:34:00 PM
Oh, Charlie - I knew whatever I read by you would touch me with talented woven feel, but I did not brace for being completely blown away. This is about the most enchanting fantasy poem I have ever wished to stay with, linger, smile and dance with. WOW FAVing Need to know if you are well, your light is on but I see only silence. All's well? CayCay
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Date: 11/13/2018 12:01:00 PM
Thank you CayCay. All is well...
Date: 9/26/2018 8:53:00 PM
It's beautifully magical indeed; thanks for a great read that I hadn't seen before.
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Date: 9/29/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thanks M.L.
Date: 9/1/2018 2:53:00 PM
This is a magical write and a joy to read today! :)
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Heidi...
Date: 8/5/2018 2:08:00 PM
Wish this one had been a winner. Coming again to see it and I really like it.
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Date: 8/6/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, not even an N/A, oh well, try again...
Date: 7/28/2018 2:42:00 PM
Hello Charlie, I would like to go to this magical place, I think I would enjoyit there. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/6/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 7/27/2018 9:37:00 PM
This lovely poem sings in a cappella. Brilliantly written Charlie! : )
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Date: 7/28/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 7/26/2018 6:58:00 PM
this is super clever. I love it!
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 7/21/2018 7:32:00 AM
A place to escape for and dream of. Wonderful write. SuZ
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne...
Date: 7/20/2018 11:59:00 PM
I wish I could run around in this magical place! Thank you for taking us there with this poem.
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Becca...
Date: 7/19/2018 10:15:00 AM
Charlie, I'm enchanted by the beauty and rhythm of your spellbinding lyric..Your sweet imagery swept me up and away to this magical place to be.. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/19/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Susan...
Date: 7/19/2018 8:24:00 AM
Charlie, I love your magical lyric ride!!
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Date: 7/19/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thanks LM...
Date: 7/18/2018 6:39:00 PM
Like these lyrics. Started smiling while reading. Refreshing imagery.
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Date: 7/19/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Susan...
Date: 7/18/2018 4:45:00 PM
An utterly delightful poem to read. Few can achieve such delicacy and wit. Think I’ll go find something sweet to eat beside an odiferous bloom.
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Date: 7/19/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Mark, try new mown hay...
Date: 7/18/2018 3:10:00 PM
This is excellent Charlie..the flow and rhythm to your lyric are wonderful.. the repeating lines make a beautiful read.
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Date: 7/18/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...
Date: 7/18/2018 2:43:00 PM
All magic, and its all out there, and in the lyric, a magical read, Mick
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Date: 7/18/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Mick...
Date: 7/18/2018 2:04:00 PM
I was gonna sing, Sea Billows roll, Heave ho me Mateys! This sure is better, since Lemon Trees flower & nothing sour ever (Lemonade from lemons for sure) Thanks, and shalom-shalom. His Peace
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Date: 7/18/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Anil...
Date: 7/18/2018 1:44:00 PM
This is so beautiful and such lovely imagery Charlie...
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Date: 7/18/2018 3:54:00 PM
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