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Such a Delight

Springtime is the season of beauty and delight. Flowers of every shape are blooming everywhere, Observing such a view is a breathtaking sight. Being one with nature is for filling and feels right. Scents of roses, lilacs, and daisies fill the air, Springtime is the season of beauty and delight. Mama bear tends to cub and he feels alright, An eagle soars high, I watch but they isn’t aware. Observing such a view is a breathtaking sight. Butterfly getting nectar had wings of gold and white. Sitting under a peach tree, I notice a brown hare, Springtime is the season of beauty and delight. Robin perched on a tree limb, to take its flight, The bird flew and April showers begin mid-air; Observing such a view is a breathtaking sight. Basking in the light showers, I had urge to write, I got wet so I dashed to an abandoned campsite Springtime is the season of beauty and delight; Observing such a view is a breathtaking sight. * If this poem looks a bit familiar it’s because I changed up a similar poem to make it in to the Villanelle form. Enjoy 04/18/2022

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Date: 5/9/2022 9:56:00 AM
Alexis, congratulations on your win in Lassad's contest. Blessings my friend
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Date: 5/6/2022 8:35:00 PM
Coming across your poem after a long time. Very beautiful one. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/6/2022 12:07:00 PM
Alexis, Congratulations on winning your placement in my contest. You've written a beautiful poem. Blessings.
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Date: 5/9/2022 10:04:00 AM
Hi I appreciate my placement. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
Date: 4/30/2022 5:26:00 AM
IS A DELIGHT - i left out the most important word! Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/28/2022 10:38:00 AM
A delightful piece Alexis, so excellently penned indeed. Have a blessed day,Gordon
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Date: 4/27/2022 12:35:00 PM
Yes Spring is a delight, but you also present this season so sparking bright, so light, so dreamy, so full of light, therefore dear Alexis your poem is a d Hope you are keeping well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/20/2022 11:16:00 AM
"The season of beauty and delight" is just the perfect way to paint Spring Alexis! I really enjoyed reading you poem today Happy Wednesday xxoo
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Date: 4/20/2022 7:57:00 AM
Hello Alexis - This is yet another wonderful describtion of Spring and all that she symbolizes and stands for. I love Autumn with all her color but I also love Spring for her meaning and rebirth. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile)
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Date: 4/19/2022 1:38:00 PM
Wonderful! God bless you always sweet friend - Love, Gina
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Date: 4/19/2022 5:48:00 AM
Impressive Villanelle, dearest Alexis. God bless you!
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Date: 4/19/2022 4:50:00 AM
You created wonderful imagery that delights the reader. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem, Alexis.
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Date: 4/18/2022 11:23:00 PM
There is a lot of imagery in this poem. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/18/2022 2:03:00 PM
Very nice writing, Alexis, filled with vivid images taking us into the spring season. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/18/2022 12:23:00 PM
This is a gorgeous poem, with such pleasing images, Alexis. I look forward to springtime with the delight you describe. Blessings, Evelyn :D
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