Succulent Sedums

cold as ice on a summer's day perennials host butterflies play

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John Freeman

Date: 9/18/2009 9:18:00 PM

Thanks for sharing the vivid comparison, Sincerely Moses

Donna Golden

Date: 9/18/2009 12:06:00 PM

I don't know why, but as a child, I always wanted to eat the sedums in our yard. Perhaps it was because they were so "succulent"! Fab, as usual, Brian. Hugs, Donna

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/17/2009 4:42:00 PM

You are so adept in your description....sedum does seem cold as ice on a summer's day! Enjoyed this one! ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 4:28:00 PM

This is an interesting piece. I have sedium called autumn the bloom looks like broccoli but is a salmon to pink color and very faithfully it blooms in September. Keep writing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/17/2009 12:37:00 PM

interesting, crystalline

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 11:52:00 AM

Recess for the butterflies, nice work.