Success

when you are idiosyncrasies of success
no matter what challenges are ahead
strive till the time you won't achieve the goal
because will power is your only weapon
to be a star who has a different beacon
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Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:49 AM
- Never give up ... uplifting lines - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Harsha :) -hugs
Singh Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Thankyou so much, I am glad you visited my poem Yes never give up is my personal experience... :)
Puddifoot Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 5:05 AM
what a strong five-liner this is..it's difficult for a very short piece to hold its own in a contest with longer poems, but this did so admirably - "to be a star who has a different beacon" i love that! congrats on your win in my contest
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:51 AM
- "but sometimes with less words we can express deep feelings" ... agere 100% :)
Singh Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 5:56 AM
I am really very thankful for your compliments ,it's true that long pieces are most preferred but sometimes with less words we can express deep feelings.. thankyou so much I am grateful that you liked my poem... :?-?)
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