Success

S~ is for a soothing summer breeze

U~ and I under a palm tree by the sea

C~ is for the care we give to every kiss

C~ says we're completely lost in bliss

E~ brings out emotions deep inside

S~ for the happy smiles we are alive

S~ is the sweetness I feel for you,when we're together
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Scott Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Nice write lots of passsion like the pattern davids ott
Neumann Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 5:13 AM
I like that poem and the slightly different format of the acrostic goes well with it. Kind wishes, Kai
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 5:42 PM
Hello Arturo Micheal, I feel the passion in this pom for your special someone. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Dutta Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 6:04 AM
A new approach for Acrostic Poem. Like the idea.
Dubarry Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 6:57 PM
You used the letters of the word, "success" to describe your beautiful love affair with your sweet heart!
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:57 AM
- So sweet and romantic, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:32 AM
Nice Acrostic...
Roper Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:05 AM
Success is well written, Arturo.
Adams Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 5:55 PM
beautiful sentiment of love in this one Arturo... wonderfully crafted :) hugs
One Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Well said and great acrostic..
Wanter Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 11:30 AM
"Sweetness." A precious tribute to someone loved.
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Very romantic acrostic Arturo. Tom
Michael Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Real love is success...Gracias Tom
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:23 AM
A heartfelt song of love--very sweet, Arturo.
Michael Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:30 AM
We are successful in many ways...A happy weekend Vijay
Sands Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:18 AM
A very sweet successful poem Arturo! Nice to read today :)
Michael Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 10:29 AM
A lovely weekend to you Heidi
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