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S~ is for a soothing summer breeze U~ and I under a palm tree by the sea C~ is for the care we give to every kiss C~ says we're completely lost in bliss E~ brings out emotions deep inside S~ for the happy smiles we are alive S~ is the sweetness I feel for you,when we're together

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Date: 1/9/2021 11:37:00 AM
Nice write lots of passsion like the pattern davids ott
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Date: 4/8/2020 5:13:00 AM
I like that poem and the slightly different format of the acrostic goes well with it. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/2/2020 5:42:00 PM
Hello Arturo Micheal, I feel the passion in this pom for your special someone. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 2/21/2020 6:04:00 AM
A new approach for Acrostic Poem. Like the idea.
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Date: 1/28/2020 6:57:00 PM
You used the letters of the word, "success" to describe your beautiful love affair with your sweet heart!
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Date: 1/28/2020 8:57:00 AM
- So sweet and romantic, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2020 2:32:00 AM
Nice Acrostic...
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Date: 1/27/2020 2:05:00 AM
Success is well written, Arturo.
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Date: 1/26/2020 5:55:00 PM
beautiful sentiment of love in this one Arturo... wonderfully crafted :) hugs
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Date: 1/26/2020 4:21:00 PM
Well said and great acrostic..
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Date: 1/25/2020 11:30:00 AM
"Sweetness." A precious tribute to someone loved.
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Date: 1/25/2020 10:26:00 AM
Very romantic acrostic Arturo. Tom
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/25/2020 10:31:00 AM
Real love is success...Gracias Tom
Date: 1/25/2020 10:23:00 AM
A heartfelt song of love--very sweet, Arturo.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/25/2020 10:30:00 AM
We are successful in many ways...A happy weekend Vijay
Date: 1/25/2020 10:18:00 AM
A very sweet successful poem Arturo! Nice to read today :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/25/2020 10:29:00 AM
A lovely weekend to you Heidi

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