Subway

It's a short fat sub that I'll grab to bite
Where the juice runs down my gums
As the flavour pools upon my tongue
and my grip becomes all thumbs

And I start to chew while breaking peppers
As the juice explodes and cools
While the taste seems strong and lasts forever
that my corner lips still drools

With a bun made warm to comfort me
Squeezed firmly in my gums
Then ripped and torn for pleasure
While the table fills with crumbs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duncan Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:56 PM
I so love Subway ,,,,, and your poem describes it well :)
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