Suburban Nocturne

A vertical sliver pries into the doorway, a beam from the watchful eye in the hall
While amber stars in cages, captives in lampposts, shout prophecies beneath the moon
Obscured by trees
Their cries filter into the window
And uniform basketball players with fake simulated faces run improbably about my TV
Defying the nighttime but not their fate, programmed by someone not so different from me
Ones and zeroes
Light and darkness
Somewhere sleeps the faithful Christian homeless man with fatigues and a fatigued face
Obscured by shelter
If I do not see him, I pray someone else will
If I cannot give to him, I pray someone else can
His chipped Styrofoam cup no longer empty of dollar bills
Ones and zeroes
Light in the darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 3, 2009 at 5:57 PM
Michael, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 28, 2009 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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April 4, 2009 at 10:30 PM
Michael - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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April 1, 2009 at 7:03 AM
God help us when we look but refuse to see. Congratulations on "Suburban Nocturne" being featured. Vince
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March 30, 2009 at 8:53 PM
Powerfully moving write, so real to life. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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March 30, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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March 30, 2009 at 12:38 PM
Powerful poem addressing important issue. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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November 1, 2008 at 5:24 AM
This is a great piece of writing Michael. Vivid, dramatic and real. Nigel
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