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Subtle Signs

brown gives way to green
winter surrenders to spring
death succumbs to life

faithnaturehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2015 9:57:00 PM

I see you used this one from a while back. Nice seeing it again and congrats on your HM, Tim.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2015 12:24:00 PM

beautifully penned congrats Tim:-) Hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/25/2013 11:30:00 AM

very good write Tim much enjoyed congrats on placing Shadow x smile

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/25/2013 9:39:00 AM

powerful piece...very strong haiku, congrats on your win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2013 5:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win,Tim. - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/25/2013 4:56:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 11:49:00 PM

Love it and what it symbolizes. Long time no see, my friend. Congrats for this one, and how are you?

Skat A

Date: 9/24/2013 5:53:00 PM

wonderful poem Tim. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

De R

Date: 6/27/2010 1:14:00 PM

This is really great, Tim! Loved your play of words in this one! Wonderful way to describe the rebirth of nature... ~Emily

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/17/2010 6:28:00 AM

Hi Tim, You're right, the first version of "Evening Symphony is the German and original one! Good guess!! Do you know German? You captured the end of winter in very nice words..Thank you for sharing your Haiku on PS and thanks for your welcome comment. Have a great time...Gert

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 4/17/2010 5:29:00 AM

rally great use of words tim just thought id swing by here thank you for being part of the pub gotta new write up would love your opinion on it cheers Gonzo

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/11/2010 2:40:00 PM

How did I miss this gem!!??? So glad I found it here in the hot poems..Tim,......this is wonderful! :) , Carrie

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2010 9:31:00 PM

Awesome job here Tim. Thanks for your comment. Agape, Moses

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/10/2010 5:52:00 AM

a beautiful weight to this fine piece! Tim! jimbo

Date: 4/7/2010 6:34:00 PM

So much said in just three lines. I really like the title. Such a fitting poem for spring. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2010 3:09:00 PM

awesome, tim!!! and gosh, I hope Boston cream was not confusing?? I hate confusing poems! thanks for reading it thru. I know it was rather long. LUv, andrea

Elaine George

Date: 4/7/2010 6:26:00 AM

Powerful Haiku, Tim. Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/6/2010 5:23:00 PM

a most excellent haiku cher...no need to capitalize for haiku ;) the title is always the first line...this is your best haiku to date! keep it up write them about the bayou? I'd love that!

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 4/5/2010 9:26:00 AM

Hearts shine, Validate that it's time, subtle indeed, these lovely signs. This is a brilliant piece Tim. Beautiful.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/4/2010 7:10:00 PM

Cool Haiku. I like your line about death succumbing to life. Interesting perspective Tim. Enjoyed -Robert

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 4/1/2010 4:31:00 AM

And its been a long time coming great piece Daniel

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/31/2010 6:08:00 AM

yes yes yes...for ever and ever amen! Light & Light cher

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 3/30/2010 7:06:00 PM

Ain't got no subtle signs here, in Southern California unfortunately :) They think as being subtle all year round... :) Nice Haiku, dear Tim :) All the very best, Iolanda