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Subtle Signs

brown gives way to green
winter surrenders to spring
death succumbs to life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/16/2015 7:19:00 PM
Tim, love the way you paint the transition to Spring in this winning haiku!
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Date: 3/12/2015 9:57:00 PM
I see you used this one from a while back. Nice seeing it again and congrats on your HM, Tim.
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Date: 3/12/2015 12:24:00 PM
beautifully penned congrats Tim:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2013 11:30:00 AM
very good write Tim much enjoyed congrats on placing Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/25/2013 9:39:00 AM
powerful piece...very strong haiku, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/25/2013 5:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win,Tim. - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Tim
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Date: 9/24/2013 11:49:00 PM
Love it and what it symbolizes. Long time no see, my friend. Congrats for this one, and how are you?
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:53:00 PM
wonderful poem Tim. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2010 1:14:00 PM
This is really great, Tim! Loved your play of words in this one! Wonderful way to describe the rebirth of nature... ~Emily
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Date: 4/17/2010 6:28:00 AM
Hi Tim, You're right, the first version of "Evening Symphony is the German and original one! Good guess!! Do you know German? You captured the end of winter in very nice words..Thank you for sharing your Haiku on PS and thanks for your welcome comment. Have a great time...Gert
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:29:00 AM
rally great use of words tim just thought id swing by here thank you for being part of the pub gotta new write up would love your opinion on it cheers Gonzo
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Date: 4/11/2010 2:40:00 PM
How did I miss this gem!!??? So glad I found it here in the hot poems..Tim,......this is wonderful! :) , Carrie
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:31:00 PM
Awesome job here Tim. Thanks for your comment. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2010 5:52:00 AM
a beautiful weight to this fine piece! Tim! jimbo
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Date: 4/7/2010 6:34:00 PM
So much said in just three lines. I really like the title. Such a fitting poem for spring. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 4/7/2010 3:09:00 PM
awesome, tim!!! and gosh, I hope Boston cream was not confusing?? I hate confusing poems! thanks for reading it thru. I know it was rather long. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/7/2010 6:26:00 AM
Powerful Haiku, Tim. Lainie
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Date: 4/6/2010 5:23:00 PM
a most excellent haiku cher...no need to capitalize for haiku ;) the title is always the first line...this is your best haiku to date! keep it up write them about the bayou? I'd love that!
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Date: 4/5/2010 9:26:00 AM
Hearts shine, Validate that it's time, subtle indeed, these lovely signs. This is a brilliant piece Tim. Beautiful.
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Date: 4/4/2010 7:10:00 PM
Cool Haiku. I like your line about death succumbing to life. Interesting perspective Tim. Enjoyed -Robert
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:31:00 AM
And its been a long time coming great piece Daniel
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:08:00 AM
yes yes yes...for ever and ever amen! Light & Light cher
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Date: 3/30/2010 7:06:00 PM
Ain't got no subtle signs here, in Southern California unfortunately :) They think as being subtle all year round... :) Nice Haiku, dear Tim :) All the very best, Iolanda
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:42:00 PM
great write!!
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