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Your teeth, locked in steel jaw force, sink further into my skin, I wince. You release. Your growl bespeaks your passion. Liberum Divisa 7 Poetry Contest Gregory Richard Barden 9/2/21 Excerpted from my poem "Love Letter" 11/7/17

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Date: 9/4/2021 6:21:00 AM
Force of your words brilliantly emotive. So well written, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/5/2021 6:13:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, out of context ( excerpted from the entire poem) it seems quite different to me!
Date: 9/3/2021 4:54:00 PM
Powerful poem Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2021 6:15:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!!
Date: 9/2/2021 11:52:00 AM
Hello Mike. All I can say is Wow!!! xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2021 11:08:00 AM
Hello Mike, you are welcome. Happy Friday. xxxx-oooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2021 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Darlene xxoo
Date: 9/2/2021 8:20:00 AM
Love it. Made me giggle. xomo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2021 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Maureen xxoo

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