Submission

Your teeth, locked in steel jaw force,
         sink further into my skin, I wince.
You release.
        Your growl bespeaks your passion.




Liberum Divisa 7 Poetry Contest
Gregory Richard Barden
9/2/21

Excerpted from my poem  "Love Letter"
11/7/17
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Pandit Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Force of your words brilliantly emotive. So well written, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Thanks Vijay, out of context ( excerpted from the entire poem) it seems quite different to me!
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Powerful poem Mike :)
Gentile Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Thank you Heidi!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Hello Mike. All I can say is Wow!!! xxxx-oooo.
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September 3, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Hello Mike, you are welcome. Happy Friday. xxxx-oooo.
Gentile Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Darlene xxoo
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September 2, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Love it. Made me giggle. xomo
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September 2, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Maureen xxoo
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