Submerged Cathedral

Sickle moon gray above the waves
The quiet directionless wind 
On the earth, and in the sky above 
A veil is drawn, cutting into dark spots 
Slowly round and round,  
Murals are etched into the sand  
The statue waits with eyes unblinking 
Silent wonder, solitary armless stone 
Twisted, counter-pose, forever fixed, 
Wonder, what does she see under water? 
Rusty bows and sterns, shipwrecks, 
Silvery fish fluttering in and out of hulls, a 
graveyard outside hallowed ground 

Archway, the great doors dark and closed
Murky, wet light pours in vaulted windows
Through water-worn edges of stained glass 
Seaweed tendrils curl around an altar 
Once, quiet processions marched up the aisle 
They are now only filtered ghosts, 
Murmuring, wavy impressions of what was 
Forever, the tide calls upon the great steeple 
And the lonely under-toe, 
Pulls a mote in the sand around her, 
To protect the bastion in the sea, 
Dark, lovely, lost forever to those above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/28/2013 12:41:00 PM
Holy! Another one for my favourites. The title really caught my eye, but your descriptions are seriously wonderful. "Through water-worn edges of stained glass / Seaweed tendrils curl around an altar." Wow.
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:08:00 PM
Jeremy, wow..this is deep and epic..love the impact . thank you for sharing :-) always~PD
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/25/2012 8:37:00 PM
Many thanks!
Date: 8/25/2012 8:24:00 AM
Amazing. What inspired this work?
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/25/2012 7:04:00 PM
Thank you. The poem was inspired by 'La cathédrale engloutie' by Claude Debussy.
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