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Of all the thoughts man's mind was equipped to have: the envious the murderous the suicidal the joyous the inexplicable none come quite as dangerous as the thoughts he gets in the shower. they make reality drizzle on his cold feet and wet his hair with possibility as loneliness reeks fresh through shampoo bottles these thoughts they put him back in his baby-shell. they seep through, consuming... lingering... uninterrupted- by the water that never runs out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/4/2011 10:50:00 AM
My goodness this had me on edge. Good feelings of course. Incredibly intense...
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Date: 1/25/2011 2:56:00 PM
Nice full of deep meanings while taking a shower with apt images, Maya
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Date: 1/25/2011 2:43:00 PM
and if only some,if not most,can plug the drainhole and avoid all the loss of such well thought out thought ?!! :)) nicely done,i like the symbolic touches which also go along with the nature of things....salam , jay
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